Shhh, listen
Pattering, pittering
All in a whisper
Rushing, slowing
Confused in duration
However, still wet
Clearing, yet nourishing
Covering, cleansing
As imperfections vanish
If you were persistent rain
And I, in need
The whisper of rain ~ sometimes that is all a person needs… Something I’ve learned along the way is that it is always the periods of drought that makes the rain so special ~ take pleasure in both 🙂
Although, give me a rainstorm any day of the week and I’ll be singing all day. Beautiful words
I know, right?! I love the rain, especially when it is respectful and quiet as it lulls me. Mmm, yeah, something tells me you’re on to me, Sir. Yeah, this was a joy to write. I’m glad you enjoyed the poem and it’s meaning.
I’d take a thrashing thunderstorm, as well. We’re so similar it’s scary sometimes, Dalo. You living in Seattle suits you, if you love the rain the way you do! Haha. Thank you, once again. Have I mentioned how much I love having you here? I hope you have a great morning.
Much rain in Seattle, although it is a drizzle-sun-drizzle type of existence…HK it can pour like nothing else. Morning & day was great…have the big Super Bowl tomorrow. Go ‘Hawks 🙂
I don’t mind the drizzle-sun-drizzle. It reminds me of Colorado, especially in the summer up in the mountains. Nothing better than the afternoon rain to cool everyone off. Your ‘Hawks beat my Packers, you know! Now, what am I gonna do with that information. Enjoy the game, Cowboy. Yeah, okay, GO HAWKS!! 😉
I think rain is healing. I was hoping to be told to go stand in the rain, but no one requested it. I guess most people don’t like rain much. Thank you, Duke. Yes, no snow. I am waiting on someone to send me a photo of snow, but seems there’s none to be had.
*sighs* Good, because I will need to watch you read every word as you read my book. Tis the only way I’ll know if you hate it or not. I couldn’t hack a computer either, but I bet you can and may…you know.
I read it for the character relationship. ..not the history. I’m shocked at the drama. And totally invested. However, I have learned a lot, which makes up for what I forgot about 9th grade history. *laughs*
Having lived in Seattle for many years, I appreciate this, first-hand, Audrey. And when I read your word “cleansing” I immediately thought of a beautiful video I shared in a post. A cleansing… a washing; it’s all semantics. 🙂 https://tonningsen.wordpress.com/2014/09/04/perspective-worth-pondering/
I’m so glad you remembered your post and offering to share it with me made me smile. Always glad when something I wrote inspires a memory, Eric. Enjoy your day. 🙂
Hello, Michael McGuire. Thank you…your ability to wow me with your vocabulary has worked again. However, this time I understood you beautifully during my first read through. 🙂 Just sorting over my email of posts this evening and I see there is a new poem from you. I shall sharpen my pencil and be over momentarily.
Rajiv. ..do you like standing in the rain? Just allowing it to pour over you? I think I want to try. 25 years is a long time. Houston gets a fair amount of rain. Great seeing you here. Thank you..
Yes, standing in the rain is fun… But, I am referring to summer rain. I was in the hills last week, and got soaked in the winter rain. Coupled with the breeze over the waters, it is less fun.. I continued to photograph, but got the flu in the bargain!
JF, I strive to be a better poet every time I pick up a pen. There are days where I don’t feel worthy of your praise. You always leave me thinking I will try again. Happy you enjoyed this one.
Yes, it’s freezing. A low of 38° tonight. Is LA any better? Guessing not…
Aww, thank you, Chris. What a compliment. Sorta speechless after that one. Smiles. (Grateful for your support.)
Might as well snow. Wet and cold makes for even colder, I think. The sun is supposed to show by morning. Fingers crossed. I’ll push it on towards my friend due east. Keep toasty!
Oh, Chum. Good to see your words here on my first day back after a brief pause. Thank you for acknowledging the work, but also for being a great support. Hugs.
There you are! I’ve been missing you , but haven’t been around much so ..IM SOWWY!!!! Happy Magical Friday May your weekend be Perfectly Enchanting !
Hey, You. Sorry, I was out of the loop a few days. Processing some extra emotion and my words weren’t playing fair, so I sat a few dances out and reflected a bit. I missed you, too. Enjoy your weekend! Stay warm, my sweet friend!
hoping all is well, my friend. my weekend is off to a great start…and is headed in a proper direction. Bottle of wine, everything tended, writing for an entire weekend…YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I was hoping I could find a way to do so, Gus. I think rain heals many of us, as the sound and the feel will be authentic every time. I need someone to push me out and tell me to stay and feel, I suppose.
Nice, I relate to rain, Ry in Japanese also being spelled Rai, which is a name that means “Thunder, Lightning, and Trust”, a poem of sorts, as one can trust thunder and lightning to bring rain. I am stormy I suppose, more than sort of loud. Sort of the opposite of your poem’s focus on quietude. I like noticing contradictions and paradoxes, as when there is rain, there is often thunder and lightning. Not always though. With thunder an lightning though, I think there is always rain, somewhere. Interesting how with the atmospheric dissonance of a thunderstorm, there is the purification and healing of the rain. The sky is ripped apart in a sense by storms, but the earth is nurtured, except where lightning strikes. Storms are sort of a mess, and I relate. I go by Ry instead of Rai for other reasons rooted in Japanese, making my name another sort of poem. Regardless, my point is that I liked your poem, and the dissonance expressed in the opposites of it. Nice write.
Hi, Ry. Thanks for sharing the details on your name. I find names facinating. There is nothing better than a quiet rain, but I also find a storm hauntingly beautiful. The fear it can create ignites excitement. ..good and bad. Yes, this poem focuses on a calmness, but within a stormy desire by the end. Enjoy your weekend. ~Audrey
Looks like y’all have had your share of rain! You know, my daddy used to love a good downpour — washed away the yuck and made things smell good again. I’ve found the most enjoyable ones come without sound and light shows!
Hi, Debbie! The rain has been here for quite some time. You get the snow and I get it in liquid form. I agree with your Dad…exactly how I feel. I love the smell of the rain back home in Nebraska the best. A little dirt, lots of prairie and just a smidge of ahhhhhh.
So lovely…you surprised and honored me with your reply, Adam. Thank you. It has been a very long time since anyone felt comfortable enough to offer a poetic explaination to my wonderings. I like your confidence.
For the wounded,
Hearts beat with rythum,
Deliberately.
Pausing on acceleration,
As truth reveals,
Life’s opportunities.
Even, déjà vu.
It wasn’t confidence; more like, I’m bad at explaining myself, and poetry is an outlet for multiple interpretation. 😛
Nice poetic response…
dé jà vu.
The pond ripples in excitement.
The pond ripples, blue.
Water formations
forever lost.
Yearning for contentment.
For you.
I think you’ve poetically stolen my line… 😛 Or read my mind. A rarity, it seems. Maybe it’s a poet thing, I suppose. (I just reread that and I soooo didn’t intend that mess to rhyme. I’m a such a dork. Giggle.
Thank you…
For me?
Winds send a message,
My fingers freeze,
Contemplation.
Mind begs,
Sincere in essense,
explanations, please.
Words given a voice,
Through me?
I have no choice.
When sight overwhelms,
when darkness clouds the light,
go forthright in the night.
The winds may sway the trees,
and jitter thine knees,
but the voice is most strong
when carried by the heart.
Sincere,
awaken thee.
Offering less than perfect,
Ceases to exsist,
Upon these lips.
Darkness offers,
Smudging lipstick,
Truer facts,
Shyness attacks.
Control takes hold,
Beneath rouge,
I know you’re new,
So let me explain.
This Crimson Queen,
Hasn’t what it takes.
Continues her search,
For her one and only:
Force of nature,
To push her through.
(Yes, the proverbial let’s talk about you. I’ll be okay.)
The whisper of rain ~ sometimes that is all a person needs… Something I’ve learned along the way is that it is always the periods of drought that makes the rain so special ~ take pleasure in both 🙂
Although, give me a rainstorm any day of the week and I’ll be singing all day. Beautiful words
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I know, right?! I love the rain, especially when it is respectful and quiet as it lulls me. Mmm, yeah, something tells me you’re on to me, Sir. Yeah, this was a joy to write. I’m glad you enjoyed the poem and it’s meaning.
I’d take a thrashing thunderstorm, as well. We’re so similar it’s scary sometimes, Dalo. You living in Seattle suits you, if you love the rain the way you do! Haha. Thank you, once again. Have I mentioned how much I love having you here? I hope you have a great morning.
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Much rain in Seattle, although it is a drizzle-sun-drizzle type of existence…HK it can pour like nothing else. Morning & day was great…have the big Super Bowl tomorrow. Go ‘Hawks 🙂
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I don’t mind the drizzle-sun-drizzle. It reminds me of Colorado, especially in the summer up in the mountains. Nothing better than the afternoon rain to cool everyone off. Your ‘Hawks beat my Packers, you know! Now, what am I gonna do with that information. Enjoy the game, Cowboy. Yeah, okay, GO HAWKS!! 😉
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I love how you make out rain to be healing. Nice. No snow, though? Hm!
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I think rain is healing. I was hoping to be told to go stand in the rain, but no one requested it. I guess most people don’t like rain much. Thank you, Duke. Yes, no snow. I am waiting on someone to send me a photo of snow, but seems there’s none to be had.
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Oh, I could send you some if you’d like. I’ve got lots of snow here. Lots.
I like standing in the rain.
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I hope you’ve managed the snow okay, Duketh. Send some right away!!
Yes, somehow, I believe you. You make me smile.
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Okay! I’ll have to take a few first. Minute one.
I do like it. It’s fun.
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Yay! *giggles* Worries no.
Do you make Amelia stand with you?
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*laughs*
Who’s she? But that does remind me: how’s your book coming?
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Very funny, Sir. My book? Tis flowing nicely, actually. The second draft, so far, makes me smile. Thanks for asking.
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Nice! Excited to hear that. Of course I can’t wait to read it.
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Thank you, I’m fairly excited myself, actually. Read what? *looks about*
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Don’t make me hack into your computer!
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You wanna read it that badly? Can you hack a computer, Duketh? I love that you want to read my book.
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*laughs* In all honesty, I probably couldn’t hack. And yes, I’d like to read your book.
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*sighs* Good, because I will need to watch you read every word as you read my book. Tis the only way I’ll know if you hate it or not. I couldn’t hack a computer either, but I bet you can and may…you know.
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How could you possibly watch, though?
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Wouldn’t be easy, I know.
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*ponders*
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*waits*
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I’m a very slow reader, you know.
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I don’t mind. I can bring a book along.
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What would you bring?
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Maybe I’ll bring an entire collection. Just so I’m prepared to be around a while, as I’m a bit of a speedy reader. *ponders a vampire series* *laughs*
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No vampires, dadblameit!
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Fine! I’ll bring my Ken Follett series. Book three just came out and its sitting here staring at me.
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When it’s not a war, yes.
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I know you like that part best.
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Goodness. What’s that?
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A World History trilogy
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Now that sounds cool.
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I read it for the character relationship. ..not the history. I’m shocked at the drama. And totally invested. However, I have learned a lot, which makes up for what I forgot about 9th grade history. *laughs*
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*laughing* History can be so forgettable.
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It can!! ….so boring!
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Having lived in Seattle for many years, I appreciate this, first-hand, Audrey. And when I read your word “cleansing” I immediately thought of a beautiful video I shared in a post. A cleansing… a washing; it’s all semantics. 🙂
https://tonningsen.wordpress.com/2014/09/04/perspective-worth-pondering/
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I’m so glad you remembered your post and offering to share it with me made me smile. Always glad when something I wrote inspires a memory, Eric. Enjoy your day. 🙂
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Cleverly wrapped up in the denouement Audrey – very adept.
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Hello, Michael McGuire. Thank you…your ability to wow me with your vocabulary has worked again. However, this time I understood you beautifully during my first read through. 🙂 Just sorting over my email of posts this evening and I see there is a new poem from you. I shall sharpen my pencil and be over momentarily.
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It’s a date! 😀
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Oh my! A second reply from the elusive McGuire. ..I may faint. ♡ And a date…yes!
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Beautiful… I lived in rainy places for over 25 years.. The first monsoon rain is liberating
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Rajiv. ..do you like standing in the rain? Just allowing it to pour over you? I think I want to try. 25 years is a long time. Houston gets a fair amount of rain. Great seeing you here. Thank you..
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Yes, standing in the rain is fun… But, I am referring to summer rain. I was in the hills last week, and got soaked in the winter rain. Coupled with the breeze over the waters, it is less fun.. I continued to photograph, but got the flu in the bargain!
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Rajiv, you know better than to stand in the winter rain!! Take better care of yourself, Sir!!
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Yeah… So I realise !
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Audrey, that final line makes a definite impact and is fitting ending to a work that most certainly makes an impact.
i like this very much indeed.
Best Always
jf
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JF, I strive to be a better poet every time I pick up a pen. There are days where I don’t feel worthy of your praise. You always leave me thinking I will try again. Happy you enjoyed this one.
Thank you. Much love,
Audrey
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Cold and rainy there, too? 🙂 Either way, best poem I recall reading about rain (literally or otherwise).
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Yes, it’s freezing. A low of 38° tonight. Is LA any better? Guessing not…
Aww, thank you, Chris. What a compliment. Sorta speechless after that one. Smiles. (Grateful for your support.)
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Believe the low is 30; showers, too. Was nice’n’warn two days ago… Should’ve bottled it up…
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Might as well snow. Wet and cold makes for even colder, I think. The sun is supposed to show by morning. Fingers crossed. I’ll push it on towards my friend due east. Keep toasty!
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I sense the cleanse, Aud. Drop by drop. 🙂
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Oh, Chum. Good to see your words here on my first day back after a brief pause. Thank you for acknowledging the work, but also for being a great support. Hugs.
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There you are! I’ve been missing you , but haven’t been around much so ..IM SOWWY!!!! Happy Magical Friday May your weekend be Perfectly Enchanting !
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Hey, You. Sorry, I was out of the loop a few days. Processing some extra emotion and my words weren’t playing fair, so I sat a few dances out and reflected a bit. I missed you, too. Enjoy your weekend! Stay warm, my sweet friend!
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hoping all is well, my friend. my weekend is off to a great start…and is headed in a proper direction. Bottle of wine, everything tended, writing for an entire weekend…YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Green with envy!! Have fun! 🙂 Yay!!
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I need it too! ❤
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♡My Willow. .. Hugs! Hope the boys are minding their Ps and Qs.
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Tomorrow will tell there is a visit fixed…. Fingers crossed.xx
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Fingers crossed! xxx
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Beautifully captures the appreciation of the sound and nurturing of the rain.
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I was hoping I could find a way to do so, Gus. I think rain heals many of us, as the sound and the feel will be authentic every time. I need someone to push me out and tell me to stay and feel, I suppose.
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Nice, I relate to rain, Ry in Japanese also being spelled Rai, which is a name that means “Thunder, Lightning, and Trust”, a poem of sorts, as one can trust thunder and lightning to bring rain. I am stormy I suppose, more than sort of loud. Sort of the opposite of your poem’s focus on quietude. I like noticing contradictions and paradoxes, as when there is rain, there is often thunder and lightning. Not always though. With thunder an lightning though, I think there is always rain, somewhere. Interesting how with the atmospheric dissonance of a thunderstorm, there is the purification and healing of the rain. The sky is ripped apart in a sense by storms, but the earth is nurtured, except where lightning strikes. Storms are sort of a mess, and I relate. I go by Ry instead of Rai for other reasons rooted in Japanese, making my name another sort of poem. Regardless, my point is that I liked your poem, and the dissonance expressed in the opposites of it. Nice write.
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Hi, Ry. Thanks for sharing the details on your name. I find names facinating. There is nothing better than a quiet rain, but I also find a storm hauntingly beautiful. The fear it can create ignites excitement. ..good and bad. Yes, this poem focuses on a calmness, but within a stormy desire by the end. Enjoy your weekend. ~Audrey
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Lovely! I like the start – very arresting!
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Alastair, Hi…thank you. Your compliment is lovely. Humbled by your return visit. Enjoy your evening.
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Looks like y’all have had your share of rain! You know, my daddy used to love a good downpour — washed away the yuck and made things smell good again. I’ve found the most enjoyable ones come without sound and light shows!
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Hi, Debbie! The rain has been here for quite some time. You get the snow and I get it in liquid form. I agree with your Dad…exactly how I feel. I love the smell of the rain back home in Nebraska the best. A little dirt, lots of prairie and just a smidge of ahhhhhh.
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Yes, I’ve had that feeling…fleeting and washed away, it is.
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Yes, Adam, it is…why?
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I can’t quite define it in words. Or maybe I hadn’t the same feeling. Or maybe I just forgot how this resonated…I don’t jot everything.
Both a blessing
and a curse, that.
Purifying,
with fear washed away,
after a while
what stands true,
memory of the heart.
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So lovely…you surprised and honored me with your reply, Adam. Thank you. It has been a very long time since anyone felt comfortable enough to offer a poetic explaination to my wonderings. I like your confidence.
For the wounded,
Hearts beat with rythum,
Deliberately.
Pausing on acceleration,
As truth reveals,
Life’s opportunities.
Even, déjà vu.
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It wasn’t confidence; more like, I’m bad at explaining myself, and poetry is an outlet for multiple interpretation. 😛
Nice poetic response…
dé jà vu.
The pond ripples in excitement.
The pond ripples, blue.
Water formations
forever lost.
Yearning for contentment.
For you.
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I think you’ve poetically stolen my line… 😛 Or read my mind. A rarity, it seems. Maybe it’s a poet thing, I suppose. (I just reread that and I soooo didn’t intend that mess to rhyme. I’m a such a dork. Giggle.
Thank you…
For me?
Winds send a message,
My fingers freeze,
Contemplation.
Mind begs,
Sincere in essense,
explanations, please.
Words given a voice,
Through me?
I have no choice.
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When sight overwhelms,
when darkness clouds the light,
go forthright in the night.
The winds may sway the trees,
and jitter thine knees,
but the voice is most strong
when carried by the heart.
Sincere,
awaken thee.
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Offering less than perfect,
Ceases to exsist,
Upon these lips.
Darkness offers,
Smudging lipstick,
Truer facts,
Shyness attacks.
Control takes hold,
Beneath rouge,
I know you’re new,
So let me explain.
This Crimson Queen,
Hasn’t what it takes.
Continues her search,
For her one and only:
Force of nature,
To push her through.
(Yes, the proverbial let’s talk about you. I’ll be okay.)
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Sometimes we thirst for the rain, both literally and metaphorically
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Yes, I agree, Monsieur. I think it’s high time someone forced me to stand in the rain.
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