Aubade’s playbill
Fantasy
Come true
Flirtatious green
Whispered
A mythical view
Flecks exposed
Electricity
How sparks flew
Feathered, appropriately
Crimson
Dusk’s favorite hue
Slivered porthole
Climaxed
Awesome blue
Dramatic sunset
Premiers:
Dreaming Of You
Oldest Daughter & Red Headed Sister 
Now that is as romantic as a poem can get… As I was reading, I had thought I hit the crescendo with “Flecks exposed, Electricity, How sparks flew” but how wrong I was as the poem grew from there until that perfect ending… Wouldn’t it be nice if life worked as well as poetry 🙂 Beautiful work Audrey Dawn ~
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Okay, your comment is amazing!! I’m a sucker for romance. I’m over the moon. It’s official. You are far too kind, and once again, you’ve made me blush. Maybe life does work as well as my poetry, ever stop to think about that, Mr. Collis? 😉 I love it when you call me Audrey Dawn…smirk. Seems as though you’re trying to seduce me, Sir. Giggle. Or I you…semantics! 🙂
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Nothing quite like a romantic ~ and agree on the semantics of the whole things ~ doesn’t really matter now does it ?!? 🙂
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Nope doesn’t matter a bit!! Smiles all around, Dalo. 😉
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Excellent poem! I love the ending line. Of course, the sunset is beautiful, too.
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Hey, You. Thanks for thinking so… The ending line, because that means the poem was finally over. *smiles* The sunset was a beautiful sight.
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Hey, Audith! Your endings are usually top. You know, the performance is usually measured by the end. Or something like that.
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Your comments are usually tops, as well. *smiles* Yes, you know, I’ve heard that phrase a time or two, actually. Never considering that it could work for me.
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I’ve heard it a few times too! Well, it definitely can work for you, and it does.
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You’re very sweet to me, you know?
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I’m nothing of the sort!
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You’re right. I was wrong.
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I love skies like that. They inspire me as well. Bravo on your candid, playful poem. 🙂
Paige
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Hi, Paige. Thank you so very much. I’m a bit obsessed with sky pics, I’m not gonna lie. I appreciate you stopping by.
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Beautiful. One of your best.
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This poem was my first after 6 days of silence from my pen. Thank you, Kate. ♡
Best? Oh my…
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You did well with the space, Aud, the space you took for yourself and the space you gave back to us today. ❤
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Thank you, my dear. Truly. Your patience means so much to me. Thankful that my poetry can inspire such an awesome Dude.
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This is wonderful, a beautiful photo and evocative words. Welcome back, where have you been!!
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Hi, Willow. Thank you. .. I was sorting all the emotion and words flying through me. I had a heavy vibe running through me and it held on for dear life. I think I’m meant to write something important soon, so I was taking some time to reflect. All was good, I just couldn’t express myself. Hope that doesn’t sound too strange. I’m glad I was missed. I appreciate you saying so…
xxxx
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I really did miss you. Xxx
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Aww. And it really is so amazing to hear…
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😉 it’s still a rocky road. Xx
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What a poem. 🙂 And that photo… my goodness, it’s full of tension.
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Hey, Luke 🙂 You could read the tension too, I bet. Thank you ♡
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For sure! And you always use words that make me stop and think. There’s no just glancing at them. 😀
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Aww. Thank you. Well, I do try to make my followers think. I have some true smarty pants reading about…I can’t bore them to death. *ponders another poem* Honestly, I have to keep them simple. I’m a simpleton, you know.
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Simple and complex simultaneously, perhaps?
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Maybe you have made quick work of figuring me out, Luke. *ponders* Yes, perhaps. However, the same could be said for you.
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Perhaps… 🙂 I don’t think I’ll ever quite figure anyone out though. You other humans never cease to blow my mind.
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You mean, us ladies, Luke. Do you have one bugging your mind? I wouldn’t be surprised if you did. Smart girl. 🙂
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Perhaps… 😀
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🙂
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I’ve been missing you, Audrey, and hoping everything was okay in your world. This is lovely — like you, I’m entranced by the blue!
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Aww. Thank you for missing me. I missed being here, too. My world is okay and I’m always smiling. However, sometimes, I have too many thoughts wanting a say and I have to shut down. Process what I need to say and decipher between what is appropriate to share and what isn’t. Mostly, what I can handle talking about and what I’m not brave enough to admit. Self vs control….more than anything I need everything I share to the authentic and real, so in turn, I wait. Patiently. Write and draw a lot and focus on truth and not negative inner chatterings that want in to discourage me. I think we can all relate.
Glad you liked the poem. The blue drew me in… Enjoy your weekend. xx
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Great poem.
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Why, adamjason, I thank you. Welcome, I’m audreydawn. See how I did that…giggle. I appreciate you’re stopping by my poetry. Don’t be a stranger.
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Such vibrant phrases inspire beautiful images — great poem, Audrey.
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I’m thrilled you have appreciation for slow to speech, as my thoughts have been a whirlwind of emotions lately. It was that sliver of blue that mesmerized me. I’m thankful these phrases came to me last night. I hope all is well, Gus. Missed you. xx
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I hope your thoughts are calmer these days, Aud.
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A bit calmer, thank you, and my thoughts are in order, I think. Well, as best they can be, as a writer, huh… 🙂
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Yeah, my thoughts can get really scattered at times. Lots of times. 🙂
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I’m happy to have you sitting beside me, Gus. Lots of times…you seem so well put together. Like nothing ever rattles you, atleast that’s how you feel, when I read your comments, in the voice I’ve created in my head for you. 🙂
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Don’t get the wrong idea — I get rattled by plenty of things, and plenty of times. And I’ve come to see that as it can be good. More interesting than being even-keeled all of the time — which would probably be boring 🙂
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Such persuasive writing, Gus. 🙂 I choose to believe you. xx
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Audrey,
You’ve pared this to the finest points without compromising the theme.
Well done!
Best wishes
jf
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Good morning, jf. Thank you for taking the time to consider my poem. I value your feedback more than you could ever know.
Much love!
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Beautiful photo and beautiful poem. 🙂
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Thank you, Jeanne. I appreciate you saying so… Welcome 🙂
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