Azure captures dawn
Respite’s freezing finale
I really must go
Find me under the blankets
Whisper the holiday back
*****
Tanka form:
Syllable pattern of 5-7-5-7-7
“…One of the oldest Japanese forms, tanka originated in the seventh century, and quickly became the preferred verse form not only in the Japanese Imperial Court, where nobles competed in tanka contests, but for women and men engaged in courtship. Tankaβs economy and suitability for emotional expression made it ideal for intimate communication; lovers would often, after an evening spent together (often clandestinely), dash off a tanka to give to the other the next morning as a gift of gratitude.”
*****
A well suited poetry form for poets who write of love, I think. I personally find the Tanka form adorable. What a childlike awe I’ve found writing this way and I’ve welcomed it.
Love is sweet, I’d say. Simple, in its invaluable importance.
Off to enjoy my final day of the holiday break. Teachers in southern Texas shall all inhale together and hold that breath until Spring Break.
It is freezing outside today. I am thrilled. Allows me to feel closer to my childhood in the Midwest.
Actually, more than that, cold weather reminds me of how much I adore the romanticism it brings along. Brrr…
Bundle up under the azure sky, beautiful. Happy New Year and be ready for the routine, Aud.
LikeLike
Thanks, Mark. I’m all in…routine is back in session. π
LikeLike
Azure captures dawn. That’s all I needed to read. While the remaining words spoke clearly and warmly, azure pierced.
LikeLike
Aww. Such a wonderful boost…thank you. Thanks for reading.
LikeLike
Love it! Glad you’re enjoying the cold. Ah… Christmas break: ’tis so fleeting.
I’d never heard of the tanka before. Quite interesting. Like a haiku, but more talkative. π
LikeLike
Thank you, Luke! The cold is a nice change, you know. Makes me feel like I’m like everyone else in the world. Ahh, yes, tis over. *cries big tears* However, I am excited to get back to work.
The tanka…you should try one! I love them. (I mean not love love, but love, ya know? I still think about your post every time I want to write the word love now…you’ve ruined me. But I needed reminding…) Yes, like a haiku… *laughs so much* You’re amazing, Luke. Best sense of humor…I like talkative. Awesome.
LikeLike
π Back to work… π¦ π
I shall try it! Hah… π You still think of it? Aaagh… we really ought to have more than one word for love though. But we manage to still make sense most of the time. Sorry to have caused such ruin…
XD You are too kind, Aud. Thanks for teaching me something new.
LikeLike
I think I remember because I have often thought the same thing. The word is tossed around a bit. You’re welcome!
LikeLike
Good place to be. BRRRRRr this is South Texas for heaven’s sake.
LikeLike
So you’re feeling it too, John? Yikes… I think I like it more than you do. Stay warm!!
LikeLiked by 1 person
It got really cold here too! Now that is an awesome music video.
LikeLike
It did? Snow? Tis still cold here, but we won’t see snow. Isn’t the video so sweet. I just love it.
LikeLike
Yes! Lots of snow. Well, it’s snowing that is. How cold is it? Yes and no…I would have done it differently. None of that mushy stuff!
LikeLike
Yay! Snow! I’m happy for you…just be careful and safe. Here it is low 40s. *frowns* Oh. Well I would have only had the children for a bit and then brought in the adults for everyone to swoon over, I think. Sounds perfect that way, I think.
LikeLike
Right on. That would have been better. The video was stunning, though.
Single digits tonight! And I have to go to church.
LikeLike
Yes, the video was stunning. Music, as well.
Brrr. Keep warm and remember your hat! *yelling from the door* Church? How nice.
LikeLike
True. I admit it. I do like Buble.
I took my Pats baseball cap! It was nice. I run sound for the band.
LikeLike
Yea, he’s okay.
You did?! Did anyone toss it into the snow by chance? *sparkles* What a great spot for you…I bet you’re good at it. I think that’s cool. Everyone was tired of listening to you play, huh? Decided to stick you behind a wall. My poor, Duke. *frowns with a little sparkle*
LikeLike
He’s okay… *laughing*
No! No one even noticed. *mad, cause he wants it to be noticed* Oh well. If the Steelers were playing the Pats, it’d be a different story. Well, I’m still learning. It’s an interesting process. I actually volunteered. Interestingly, I’ve only played on stage a few times.
LikeLike
Yeah, that’s right. I said, okay… *stern look*
Aw, I’m sorry. Would you like me to notice next time. To go on and on about how cool you are for wearing such a cool cap? *wondering who the cool dude is in the Pats cap is* *acts and plays along* Why would it be a different story, Sir? I bet you’ve learned a ton already. I think that’s best, you know. To throw yourself into a situation so you can learn as quickly as possible. It works for me. Huh, I wouldn’t have guess that, Duke.
LikeLike
Wow. You really hate the bloke.
*laughs* Well, because I live in “Steeler country”. They all would have been mad, then. I am learning! It’s really cool. Never mixed for a live band. It can be loud too. *holds ears*
LikeLike
Do not. Just cause he’s okay? I like him. He’s fun to dance to, I bet.
Oh yes, that’s right. You’ve all done hard time. Stealers never learn… *giggles* Those are the bumblebee colors, correct? I bet you have a great time. Loud is okay…I think you’re cool.
LikeLike
Bumblebee? *laughing lots* Hey! It’s the steel curtain. Now you’re making me want to defend the bums. I really do dislike them. Oh well.
I bet you’d love the music, Audith. Our worship pastor has to be one of the best–ever!
LikeLike
*giggles too much* I’m sorry. I’m kinda really happy that you dislike them, actually. However, you should cheer them on…I mean you’re from there. ..you kinda have to, Duke.
I bet I’d love the music, too. Maybe even the worship pastor, if the music is that good. What song is most popular right now?
LikeLike
They just lost–horribly, you know! It makes it fun when I get together with family. I’m always pulling for the Pats.
My fav as of now is “The Great I Am.” I love that song. How about you? You have a favorite?
LikeLike
Pats will probably win this weekend and so will my Packers!!
Good song! Hmm? I’d have to think…
LikeLike
It will be the Pats and your Pack in the Superbowl!
It’s def hard.
LikeLike
Yes, and I shall watch!! Maybe Rogers isn’t hurt too badly. I fear tomorrow’s game a bit.
LikeLike
Did Rogers get hurt?
LikeLike
He was stepped on two weeks ago…seemingly on purpose, but I think he’s okay. Your Pats won, Duke!!!!!!
LikeLike
I remember the sudden. It was that guy with the stupid name. How mean.
They did! And Julian threw a touchdown! *super excited*
LikeLike
Yes, and he was a superstar for the Nebraska Cornhuskers, if you can believe that… *stunned* He was and still is a bit of a local hero around my hometown. I choose to believe he didn’t do it on purpose.
Seems the Pack did well, too. Yay!
LikeLike
Hmm…he’s such a bad actor. At least, he could have tried to make it look convincing…you should beat him.
They did! Beat the cowboys.
LikeLike
He is a bad actor, I agree. I may beat you… *tries to smile*
Yep
LikeLike
Agreed π and it’s getting colder! π¦
LikeLike
Yes, I heard that you guys in Pennsylvania are about to enjoy snow. I find that a wonderful thought, Morgan. Be careful and stay warm. π
LikeLiked by 1 person
I don’t mind snow, I just wish it could happen at 40 rather than 20 π
LikeLike
No kidding…snow at 40Β° is slush, I think. π
LikeLike
Or Ice cream…depending π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Teeheehee π See your mind is gorgeous.
LikeLiked by 1 person
π
LikeLike
I’m tempted to get under the covers too! At least the sun is out. That goes a long way to making things right.
Leslie
LikeLike
I know how grueling the cold can be, Leslie. At least the sun is out, indeed. Stay warm!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Staying under the blankets is a good place to be when it’s so cold outside!
LikeLike
Yes, tis. Fun can happen there, huh, Gus. π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Sure can π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Haha…I knew you’d agree. π
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’m snuggling right there with you. Yep, it is freezing here too. Great post, Audrey. (((HUGS))) Amy
LikeLike
I snuggled early and had to get out to enjoy it, Amy. The weather temps never get this low, so when they do I have to go have some fun. Gotta see who else enjoys the coolness. Thanks, Amy. π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Too cold for me, Aud. We are headed for single digits here. That bites. Brrrrrrr …….
LikeLike
Yeah, single digits and I’m indoors too Amy. Nobody likes those temps. Stay warm!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Actually, it is a really pretty day here, sun out, lightly snowing, yes very very cold, but I was thinking by dressing very very warm, I could go out for a little while. We have a heat wave with temps in low 20’s right now. Hmmm … an hour outside I just might do …. (smile) Love, Amy
LikeLike
Glad the sun was out a bit, Amy. I hope you enjoyed a brisk outing. Warmer today here, as well. Smiles. Hugs to you. How’s your dad?
LikeLiked by 1 person
Palliative Care is being consulted today, Audrey. The process has finally begun to make him as comfortable as possible. Docs are finally acknowledging he is just ready to go HOME. I am happy for him. I am sad for me. Thank you for asking. (((HUGS))) Amy
LikeLike
Oh, Amy. I’ll be thinking of you. I’m so sorry. You sound a bit at peace with your Dad’s decision.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hospice is now involved, Audrey. I said goodbye to my Dad tonight over SKYPE. I pray he leaves tonight. xx Amy
LikeLike
Amy, my heart is breaking for you. I’m so sorry to read this note from you. I pray he goes quickly and is lead home by our Father in a timely fashion, if that is what is meant to be. What a day you must have had… Love and thoughts to you, my friend. I’m praying for you all.
Audrey
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’m waiting to hear if I can be included via SKYPEwith the meeting with Hospice. I am very strong on giving enough meds to make someone who is dying in la la land. These docs so far have been far too stringent on pain and anxiety management and this, Audrey, riles me to no end. Medicine has zero compassion in it. THIS is the reason why I work so hard to get Vet medicine to see that there is so much change needed. If I cannot help my Dad right now, at least I texted my brother and sister involved with his care which meds he should be getting now. Pray that I am able to get connected so that I can be actively involved in this most important meeting today. Love you! (((HUGS))) Amy
LikeLike
I am praying for your need, Amy. Yes, give him morphine. Let him go pain free. Absolutely. My thoughts are near, my friend. I’m glad your siblings are close by… Thanks for keeping me update so I can pray for you. β‘β‘
LikeLike
“Find me under the blankets.” Yep, me, too, Audrey. It’s 12 degrees outside and feels like 1; not fit for man nor beast, as they say. What part of the Midwest did you grow up in? I’m in Illinois and it’s nice to meet another Midwesterner! Lovely tanka — you can tell I’m not a “real” poet ‘cos I know zilch about forms, etc.!
LikeLike
It began as a cool upper 30s here, which rarely happens, Debbie. I love it. I had to get out and enjoy the frisky weather. I’m a born and raised Nebraskan…college in Kansas. I know Illinois, as I have a Grandmother in northern Wisconsin, so we’ve traveled the state. I admit to adding the link for you, Debbie. I try to help my new followers a bit. Smiles. Enjoy your day!
LikeLike
Aw, gee, thanks for thinking of me! I love learning new things, and I’m always pleasantly surprised by how much others know about stuff that I don’t. It’s snowing — again — here, and this time, we might actually pile up a couple of inches. Want some???!
LikeLike
You’re welcome! I’ll take every inch you don’t want, Debbie. Be careful and try to smile through it. I know the snow can get tiring after a while. Enjoy!
LikeLike
Cool…no pun intended. π
LikeLike
Haha. Yep. Thank you π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Love the poem Audrey. Have a great last day. You’re just a big romantic, aren’t ya. π π π π
LikeLike
I am, thanks, Staci.
LikeLiked by 1 person
β€ A heart for the romantic.
π
LikeLike
Thanks, I’ll take it. β‘ Something tells me you’re a romantic, as well.
LikeLiked by 1 person
β€ β€ β€ β€ Now what makes you think that?
hehehe
π
LikeLike
Maybe you just proved my point. π
LikeLike
It is extremely hot and muggy here in the rainforest. Enjoy your last day of break.
LikeLike
Umm, so I’ve gathered. I had no doubt that she’d enjoy herself, Sir. Lucky lady. Oh, and I have, thank you. I do prefer the late fall type weather we’re having here right now. Bundling up makes one frisky, which is fun.
LikeLike
beautiful!
LikeLike
Thank you, Cindy π Happy New Year!
LikeLike