Anticipating success,
I’d bring you here,
Sit you down,
Then ask you to relax.
Calmly,
I’d teach,
Your hand,
How to be,
Near me.
Inhaling,
Slowly guiding,
Finger tips,
Towards the place,
I’ve needed,
You to respond to,
And grown tired of,
Waiting for…
Exhaling,
At your touch,
As your fingers,
Slowly weave,
With mine.
Sighing,
Allowing you,
To explore,
My warmth,
By finally,
Holding hands.
Oldest Daughter & Red Headed Sister 
That’s beautiful…the words and the picture…and very sweet, I think.
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Thank you ever so, Duketh. Are you going to sit with me on that bench? Aww…you’re being very sweet today. Why? ♡
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Sure. But then we’re going to have to play something in the water. Maybe water football. Sweet…oh dear. I am not!
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Yay! Water football? Umm. I suppose, but I think that’ll be way less fun. Yes, to me you are, Duke.
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*laughs* Well…I don’t know…
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*laughs with you* Don’t know what? You know everything.
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*shakes head* I’m nervous.
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I’m sorry. *throws rocks in the water one by one*
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*laughs and tries to skip one*
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*skips three in a row* That may be a record, Duke. You can look at me, you know.
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Wow! That was awesome. *fist pump*
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Thanks! *smiles* New rule. I’m not fist pumping… *hugs you*
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Oh dear! But why?
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*shrugs her shoulders*
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“One of the advantages of being disorganized is that one is always having surprising discoveries.”
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I am pretty organized, you know, but thanks. I do enjoy discoveries. Thanks for commenting. 🙂
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Sweetly sensuous.
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Thanks, Kate 🙂 Glad you think so…
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Dear Audrey,
You’re a tease.
Love Mike
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My Dearest Mike,
But I have amazing follow through…
Love, Audrey
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Written like the true sensualist that you are. Wonderful piece.
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I love that you see that in me. Thank you, Michael.
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Audrey,
this is gorgeous
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Thank you, John. I enjoyed writing this and allowing my mind to consider possibilities. Enjoy your weekend. ♡
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Beautiful expression of emotions, Audrey. I believe I must sit with this one for quite some time if I am to fully understand the complete sagaciousness of this poem, both obvious and subtle, including the anomalous placement of commas. Brilliant writing! Thanks for inspiring me, just when I needed it the most. Have a beautiful weekend!
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Why, thank you, Michael. You succeeded in making me smile and then laugh, you know. Happy to see you following along so well. I’m impressed. You’re very kind and your compliments make me blush. I appreciate it. I’m thankful to have inspired you. Hugs! 🙂 Have a great weekend, as well.
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So very romantic…and beautifully wonderful! Have a blessed weekend!
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Thank you, Wendell. Very happy you enjoyed it. I will, hoping the same for your weekend.
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Sly and lovely, Aud. This is a great one.
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Why, thank you, Zak. I’m glad you think so. I like the idea of being sly.
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mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm very very romantic 🙂 ❤ 🙂
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Mmmmmmmmm, just how I want to start my weekend. The right frame of mind. 🙂 xxx Thank you, my dear.
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Me too, now! Have a Fantastic Week End 🙂
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Thanks, you too! 🙂
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