What I should have said,
Are the words swirling inside my head.
Creeping about my mind,
Wishing for a way, one I could find,
For expressing the deepest parts of me.
Knowing I could trust, and you believe.
This is beautiful Audrey Dawn. Getting the right words in your head is extremely difficult at times, but letting those words flow out of you the truly expresses how how you feel, is the most difficult of all. I think you’re ready to speak your mind. Thanks for sharing this with us.
Yes, it’s pretty good. Thank you. I’m glad to hear it’s slowing down. Weeks can take you for a long ride but it’s always a good ride in the end. #justlove
They do, Louis. 🙂 I guess it’s safe to say that you know this feeling. I encourage you to go for it, unless you’re feeling the urge to sing the elements song….then maybe hang tight and think it through, however she may find it fantastic and very clever. 🙂
Haha, yes, well, since you bring it up, I do know this feeling… pretty well… It’s complicated. Words are complicated. Saying what we mean would be a whole lot easier if we were able to comminicate articulately through music, don’t you think?
But yes, probably not the Elements Song. 😛
Frédéric, I needed to hear that today. Thank you… I think you’re being far too generous. I’m always happy at least one other person can feel the words I write from my heart. You are the best of men. Hugs! ♡
Hi, my friend. I’m glad you enjoyed. xxx (No problem, I haven’t had an extra second either. Thanks for letting me know you got my reply. I was worried it had been lost in cyberland. My inspiration is fleeting, as well.)
Relationships are so complicated. Should we acquaint only with strangers and never get close to anyone, so many troubles would not exist.
Nah.
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Yeah, nah. 🙂 Relationships no matter how complicated are worth it. Thanks for coming by… ♡
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Oh, I do this sort of thing all the time, I think.
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Yes, I know we all do. Thanks for making me feel normal, Duke.
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You know what I usually say to myself? I can’t think about that right now. And I don’t.
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Haha….you sound like Scarlet O’Hara!!!! I don’t think about it either. *didn’t mean a word of that*
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She does say that! What didn’t you mean?
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Yes, she does… I meant that I didn’t mean I don’t think about things. *crosses her eyes* Did that come out right? *laughs*
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Oh! Yes, it did.
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Oh…well good, I think.
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Audrey,
i can identify with this so well
Thank You
john
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Thank you for standing next to me, John. 🙂 xx
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aah, beautiful!, Audrey! ❤
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Hi, Neha. Thank you…. ♡♡
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You’re most welcome, hope all is well 🙂
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All is well, Neha, thanks for asking. I do hope you are enjoying having your husband around again. ♡
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Thank you Audrey, I am 🙂 and I am glad that all is well at your end ❤
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You’re welcome! ! Good, yay! ♡
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This is beautiful Audrey Dawn. Getting the right words in your head is extremely difficult at times, but letting those words flow out of you the truly expresses how how you feel, is the most difficult of all. I think you’re ready to speak your mind. Thanks for sharing this with us.
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Thank you, Michael. Your encouraging words are helpful. Ready to speak my mind? Oh my, now I’m nervous. 😉 You’re welcome, of course.
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But you didn’t, and he wouldn’t. And won’t. Your poetry is the best part, Red.
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Yes. Yes. Yes. Thank you for reminding me, Chum. ♡
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And now everyone knows … 🙂
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Knows what? 😉
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What you should have said can be read in your lines above … 🙂
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Yes, a very good point, Salva. No denying that, my dear.
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Alwys happy to think along the same lines! 🙂
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Yes, tis. 🙂
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🙂
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I believe in this poem. Hope your week is going as well as you wanted.
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Hi, Benjamin. It has been awhile! Thank you for believing in this poem. I appreciate it. A busy week, but slowing down now. Hope all is well with you.
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Yes, it’s pretty good. Thank you. I’m glad to hear it’s slowing down. Weeks can take you for a long ride but it’s always a good ride in the end. #justlove
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Great news. Yes, first if the week is always a bit busy. I think for most, actually. A good ride…I like to think so. A nice # there, B.
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Thanks. That’s good. Busy can be better than not busy. Have a great rest of your night!
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Lovely. I have to say I love your Birds of Paradise as well. Ours are blooming like crazy.
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Thank you, John. 🙂 I love this time of year. They’re sprouting everywhere.
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Well described, that struggle of finding the right words.
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Thanks, Gus. 🙂 Sometimes it’s the allowing them out that gives me the most trouble. What the heck am I worried about, anyway?! 🙂 ♡
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I think worries and doubts help keep us sharp, humble. Looks like you got your groove back — and I’m happy for it!
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Thank you, truly, Gus. ♡
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They just keep swirling and creeping don’t they…
Love it!
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They do, Louis. 🙂 I guess it’s safe to say that you know this feeling. I encourage you to go for it, unless you’re feeling the urge to sing the elements song….then maybe hang tight and think it through, however she may find it fantastic and very clever. 🙂
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Haha, yes, well, since you bring it up, I do know this feeling… pretty well… It’s complicated. Words are complicated. Saying what we mean would be a whole lot easier if we were able to comminicate articulately through music, don’t you think?
But yes, probably not the Elements Song. 😛
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So much easier, indeed! Hugs all around. 🙂
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Thanks, Audrey! Hugs to you too! 🙂
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Thanks! I accept! Enjoy your weekend, Louis. 🙂
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Oh, I have that feeling often.
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Maybe I need someone to make those words come out, as I have yet to convince myself to do so.
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Sometimes you have to let it out whether or not someone is receiving it well.
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Yes, I will try to remember. A very good point. Thank you.
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You’re a master of “poèmes d’amour’… xxoo
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Frédéric, I needed to hear that today. Thank you… I think you’re being far too generous. I’m always happy at least one other person can feel the words I write from my heart. You are the best of men. Hugs! ♡
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OH!! I do love this 🙂 Thank You so much for Sharing my World of Inspiration. (I haven’t forgotten you by the way…just waiting for Inspiration to hit 🙂
Blessings of Contentment, Dear Friend~
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Hi, my friend. I’m glad you enjoyed. xxx (No problem, I haven’t had an extra second either. Thanks for letting me know you got my reply. I was worried it had been lost in cyberland. My inspiration is fleeting, as well.)
Hugs! Thank you…♡♡♡
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Beautiful.
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Hi, Callum. Thank you..
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