Quiet reflection
Indigenous surroundings
Contemplating life
Beneath a monochrome sky
Possibility of us
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Quiet reflection
Indigenous surroundings
Contemplating life
Beneath a monochrome sky
Possibility of us
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(For those who want to understand this poetic form: Tanka Form Info )
Oldest Daughter & Red Headed Sister 
Quiet and still, Aud. Hardly a breath.
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*sigh* Thank you, Chum.
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Quiet reflection sounds like a good way to get your groove back 🙂
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Yes, *smiles* I agree. Dumb water pictures. LOL Thanks, Gus. ♡
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Oh yes, I agree with Frederic. Actually, oftentimes I see the metaphysical in your poetry Audrey.
Lovely Tanka.
🙂
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Thanks, Staci. Yes, I think you do and maybe it is a bit easier to find as a female reader. We understand each other better sometimes.
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Beautiful.
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Thank you, Susan. 🙂 Coming from you, such a splendid writer, I am thrilled you think so. Nice to hear from you.
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You are welcome – though I don’t know about splendid. (That is one of our family’s favorite adjective.)
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Aww, I loved that I used it then, Susan. You are very clever.
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Thank you, Audrey. That means a lot coming from you.
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You’re welcome, Susan
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Ooo! I think you’re on Yoda’s planet there.
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He is my favorite, you know. *smiles* I bet he does live somewhere fantastic like this, Duketh.
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But he needs a red lightsaber.
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No he does not!!
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Yes, he does! And Sideous beat him, too.
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You lost me at Sideous…. *laughing*
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He threw Yoda over the side of a disk!
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Oh, was that in the new ones? I haven’t paid much attention to those…
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It was, yes.
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I know…I’m so boring. Sorry. I don’t know. *sad face*
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You are not!!!
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Yes, ya huh.
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No, nope not!
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Tis true….I can’t follow your choice in conversation, which means I must change the subject or distracte you.
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That’s what usually needs done to wild beasts, you know.
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You are a wild beast, you know.
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*smiles proudly* And here I had no idea…
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No idea?! *slams the door*
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*laughing lots*
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*giggle*
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I found that very relaxing.
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Good morning, Richard 🙂 I was hoping this poem would come across that way. I needed the structure of the form’s rules last night and so maybe it helped relax me, as well.
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That’s good.
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I think so 🙂
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So lovely, so so lovely, Audrey, tender and warm
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Good Morning, John. Your words reflect how I feel about your comment. Thank you…
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Very nice. Mystical, perhaps.
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Thank you, Rajiv. Yes, I think so. 😉
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Still water are deep… what a profound poem; the last line is metaphysical… ♥
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Always happy to receive your feedback, Frédéric. Yes, metaphysical. Thank you… ♡
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