Just Like That

Image | Posted on September 29, 2014 by Audrey Dawn - Oldest Daughter Redheaded Sister

And then she sighs to herself
Yes, it is just like that…
Guessing, however, she’s quite sure
The beat of her heart is heard

27 thoughts on “Just Like That”

Heard like a hammer on a nail echoing through an empty garage, hey, Aud?

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Audrey Dawn - Oldest Daughter Redheaded Sister says:

September 30, 2014 at 2:54 pm

Yeah, something like that…a wonderful image, Chum. I really hope so.

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Lovely Audrey. I love that first line, ‘And then she sighs to herself’.
🙂

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Audrey Dawn - Oldest Daughter Redheaded Sister says:

September 30, 2014 at 2:25 pm

Thank you, Staci. I was torn on how to get those feelings out and then it occured to me… *sigh* 🙂

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stacilys says:

September 30, 2014 at 2:29 pm

It definitely paints a picture.
🙂

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Audrey Dawn - Oldest Daughter Redheaded Sister says:

September 30, 2014 at 2:38 pm

Yeah ♡

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I like how it hits with a hard punch. The poetry, I mean. See? Hearts are so loud, and they give you away. Best to lose them in battle. *nods*

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Audrey Dawn - Oldest Daughter Redheaded Sister says:

September 30, 2014 at 10:22 am

Why, thank you, my dear. Was it like that? *smiles* I guess you’re right. Maybe writing poetry just gives me away, I guess. I should stop.

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Professor VJ Duke says:

September 30, 2014 at 2:24 pm

I didn’t say that! *growls*

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Audrey Dawn - Oldest Daughter Redheaded Sister says:

September 30, 2014 at 2:42 pm

But, you sorta told me it wasn’t worth feeling with my heart. It is all I know. Most romantics suffer from this fate.

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Professor VJ Duke says:

October 1, 2014 at 7:15 am

Oh. I’m just trying to show you that the professor gets on without a heart.

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Audrey Dawn - Oldest Daughter Redheaded Sister says:

October 1, 2014 at 8:35 am

I know you are and I believe you. I just find that…sad.

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A hopeful step from the poem you posted before this one, and I like that you’re sure the beat of your heart is being heard. Judging from your likes and comments, you have lots of fans of your poetry, so you are indeed being heard 🙂

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Audrey Dawn - Oldest Daughter Redheaded Sister says:

September 30, 2014 at 9:03 am

That poem, Gus, was a brief moment of emotion I found by looking back. One must never look back, I guess. The future is so much better. I have to post sad poems, too, ya know. To keep you on your toes. I can’t have you bored. As far as the fans go, well, yes, you’re right. It means a lot to have August Macgregor around and reading my poetry. I value your opinion, August. 🙂

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augustmacgregor says:

September 30, 2014 at 10:43 am

Sad poems are good — they’re honest and part of what you’re feeling. And they can be beautiful, too — like some sad songs. I was just glad that this poem was on a more positive note 🙂

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Audrey Dawn - Oldest Daughter Redheaded Sister says:

September 30, 2014 at 11:50 am

Yes, I like a good sad song. Thanks, Gus. ♡

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