My
Darling,
A magical
Offering of
Attentiveness
My delectation
Even for a fantasy
September’s ending
Or is it just beginning
Wrapped here with you
Trusting in your feathers
Chest against soft breasts
Leaning for conversation
Whispering into my ears
About peace and worry
Relating, so perfectly
Our reactions blush
Soft fleshy quiver
Your smile sighs
Lips closer still
Landing upon
Fairest skin
Delicately
Kissing
A red
Ear
Oldest Daughter & Red Headed Sister 
Amazing. Not only does it read perfectly, with words holding so much meaning ~ but it is just beautiful to look at as well. Brilliant, brilliant and your wonderful ending yet again 🙂 Maybe one of my favorites of yours ~
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Speechless… You’ve started and ended your visit leaving me speechless. Thank you for being so supportive, Dalo. I am always left in complete awe when you find my poetry inspiring. You inspire me. Always. A favorite? Randall, thank you… ♡♡ My ears are blushing infinite shades of red. Come closer. 😉
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🙂 Happy to hear… Off to Hangzhou/China for the next 3+ weeks, so will be behind the Great Fire-Wall of China ~ out-of-touch, out-of-mind with WordPress, which actually is never too bad of a thing either. Cheers and wish you more inspired work. Enjoy the weekend!
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Be careful, Dalo. I just read your post. Busy last couple of days had me backed up in my post emails and definitely didn’t expect a new post from you so soon. I guess I need to start watching for smoke signals or something… 😉 Enjoy Hangzhou. You will be missed. ♡
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Hangzhou was nice…although it is very good to be back in HK 🙂 I have a lot of catching up to do with your poems! May need a bottle or two…
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Dalo!!!!!!!!! You’re home. You’re back. You’re in one piece. You’re here!!!!! Thank you for letting me know. ♡ I would love to share those two bottles with you. Okay, I’ll let you put me down now. *slowly wipes the lipstick from your cheeks*
Okay, I’m pulling myself together now. Poetic hat on perfectly… *smiles* Checked the mirror. Looks good…fire away, Photographer. 😉 I missed you horribly. 😚 Welcome home! (I’m pretty sure I embarrassed myself just enough.) Hi! 🙂
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Back in one piece ~ and so very nice to have you jump into my arms 🙂
Brought a great smile to my face, the perfect remedy for a slow morning! Looking forward to sharing the bottle(s)! Cheers to a great day (and night for you).
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I’m still grinning. 🙂 I think you have me in the palm of your hand. 🙂 Glad I could be part of your morning. I do hope your day went well. My night was full of smiles. I look forward to sharing those bottles, too! ♡
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🙂 Had a good day, the evening was funny as all these kids in Halloween costumes were walking around and the locals loved it… Cheers to a great weekend.
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Sounds great. I bet the children enjoy it, too. What a great cultural experience for all. I’m headed downtown today for a conference for teachers on continuing education through animals. I bet I see children in costume there, as well. Enjoy your weekend, Randall.
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You rock, Audrey!! This is Gorgeous…tantilizing…Amazing 🙂
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Purrrr…..shucks, Morgan. I was in a mood the other morning. Thank you! Truly! Stop… 😉
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LOL 🙂
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🙂 “Our reactions blush”: such a clever line. Have a great day as well!
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Thanks, B. 🙂
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You’re welcome 🙂
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🙂
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Delectable indeed AD, a shapely flowing of desire and rapturous (wrappeduous?) embrace. A commendable work.
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Thank you, Mr. McGuire. I’d have you seeing my poetry no other way. (Sounds perfect!) Thank you for your visit.
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exceptionally clever!
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Hi, Willow…thanks! If you say so… xx
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Oh, so good!
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Thank you, Lovely Kate ♡
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Is that a Griffin, Audith?! Cool!
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Yes, Duketh, it is…! You like him, too, I see. *smiles*
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I love him–lots! I’d like to be a griffin.
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Yeah, you would have enjoyed this park downtown, then. He’s very cool. You’ll be seeing his front side soon… What would you do as a griffin?
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Capture castles, I think. And steal gold. Can’t wait to see that!
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Castles and gold…..yeah. *daydreams* Soon. I have to figure out what to say first. The hard part.
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Tell the story about how the rabbit fears for his life when the griffin is about!
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I wouldn’t know how to write that, Duke… Seriously..
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Mr. Warrior will help you!
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He does not like to write, Duke. Drives me nuts, you know!! Loves to read.
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I used to be a good reader, until my eyes fell out.
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I’ll read to you, Duketh.
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Liked it and found the red ear from the blush endearing.
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Hi, John. I’m glad you enjoy a red ear…I do, too.
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Oh Crimson Queen!! You have outdone thyself!
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Oh, my Indian Cowboy, I do enjoy making you use your exclamation points. 🙂 Why, thank you, my dear.
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An arrow to a heart, Aud. Lovely.
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I do enjoy your eye, Chum. Thank you. Glad you found the poem lovely. ..
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Beautifully shaped poem, as Staci, I also love the first two lines “my darling”… and the line “about peace and worry”…
Have a nice Sunday! ♥
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I’ve always wanted to be called My Darling. I think it is a beautiful name. I’m really happy you enjoyed this poem, Frédéric. ♡ My day was busy, but nice. Enjoy your Monday…
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I love that expression, “my darling” . It’s such a sweet tern if endearment. And I love that that flower.
Lovely Audrey.
🙂
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Something I’ve always wanted to be called, Staci. Thank you. .. ♡
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Hehehe. That’s sweet.
🙂
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Oh my goodness, Audrey – this is amazing. And I love the conformation of the poem as well. Taking my breath away.
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Yay! If you approve then it was worth the write, Shari. Thank you so much for your support. I was hoping it would come across well, but one never knows… *sigh*
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