No matter the distance
Or how loud the call
With or without the view
Still, love is craved, above all
Functions exist
Essence is missed
Daylight survives
Moments lack bliss
Destiny occurs
We haven’t the choice
Knowing most lines are blurred
Fate has a voice we’ve all heard
Oldest Daughter & Red Headed Sister 
Beautiful…photo and words. The title is perfect, destiny can be this thing that gets in the way at time 🙂
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This was taken in Colorado this summer. I’m wishing I had more skill with a camera, so my sharing them would really show the beauty of my mountains. Love that place so much, Dalo. Destiny, can do whatever she’d like… 🙂
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Nothing quite like a great landscape to admire…even skillful use of a camera cannot touch the skillful use of words 🙂
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And you, Sir, are a flirt! Thank you… 🙂
I also disagree…your photos are amazing.
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Ha, ha…you saw through that pretty easily 🙂
Keep the words flowing we wait your next poem (which just arrived…).
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I did. I like it, too. 😉
Aw. Well, thank you… (I just checked. It did about the same time as your comment. AND your new post!!!! Why didn’t you tell me??)
Gotta go…! I have a class to attend or post to read… He’s pretty amazing. Taught me a lot, actually. You should read his stuff. 😉 Yay!
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Way to go! I love it!
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Thank you, B! Smiling brightly…I appreciate that…
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You’re welcome. I like when you smile. Have a great weekend!
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Aw. Now I’m blushing. You too, Benjamin. 😉
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What an awesome picture!
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My mountains, Duke. They are splendid, aren’t they?! Thank you.
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They are! How much are they? I’d like to buy them.
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I’m glad you like them, Duke. *laughing a lot and a lot* I’ve been wondering that my entire life. I’m not sure mountains can be purchased, but buying a cabin within them is a splendid idea. I’d love to!
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Like that middle stanza effect. 🙂
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Thank you! That stanza is the pit of what doesn’t work without the other half. 🙂 Glad you liked the middle. I was worried it sounded too rhymy, but it was my favorite so I left it alone.
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Yes, Aud. You write it like it is, my friend.
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I needed to understand better, so I took myself to school today. Hope it sticks, Chum.
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I love the way the change in meter draws attention to itself in just the right way. Wonderful.
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I appreciate you noticing the shift. I wanted it to read like an emotional process of sorts. Thank you!
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Wonderful, Audrey 🙂 And very true!
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Thank you, my friend. Have a great weekend!! 🙂 🙂
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Beautiful 🙂
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Thank you, Phen 🙂 Thanks for saying so, and welcome.
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It’s exactly like that 🙂
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I figured you would understand. 🙂 ♡ Have a great afternoon, my friend.
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🙂
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Just Beautiful View and image!
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Thank you, Dear. Have a great weekend! 🙂
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