Searching tonight,
Over a lustrous sky,
Exhausting the view.
Twilight shifts slowly,
Golden eyes fluttering,
Transforms dusk into you.
Searching tonight,
Over a lustrous sky,
Exhausting the view.
Twilight shifts slowly,
Golden eyes fluttering,
Transforms dusk into you.
Oldest Daughter & Red Headed Sister 
Beautiful 🙂
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Thank you so much for stopping by, Callum. B, was very sweet to introduce us. You are welcome back anytime.
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amazing picture with perfect lines. only few lines but it said so many things
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Thank you so much, Anna. Have a great weekend!!
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Dusk has that moment when it flutters, waves, says goodbye into night. You caught it with these lines, Aud.
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It does, Chum. Thanks for seeing it the same way. Have a great day!
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Delightfully beautiful!
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Thank you, B. This sunset helped sort my thoughts. Glad you enjoyed it. Have a great day!
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Wow, I love this! How perfectly it captures falling into dreaming!
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In dreams, is where life continues. Thank you for seeing this for what it is, Poet.
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The last two lines are wonderful. I could feel it, I think.
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Thank you, Duketh. I feel those lines, as well.
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Something magically about them. (Is your book finished yet?)
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Magic can be real, right, Duke? Maybe? (Pfft. Yet? Not yet….why??)
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I think so, for sure! (Because I’m waiting! And I’m wondering.)
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Me, too! (You do a lot of that.) *laughs*
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*stomps foot* I’ll keep it up too!
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*sparkles brightly* What is it you wanted again?
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How your book is coming!
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It’s coming along nicely. I am closing up shortly, I think. I don’t see how I need to add much more. You won’t want to read it, you know.
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No, I really think I do want to read it! You must tell me when it is finished. If you don’t want me to read it, that’s fine.
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Why do you think you want to read it? Do you think it’ll be good enough? I worry all the time about that, actually. I know you’re critical of your own work. I am too. I worry, a lot. Could be total rubbish. I don’t think it is, but it could be.
Telling you when it’s done won’t be hard. Of course, I’d be honored to have you read it.
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I think every artist feels that way from time to time. Have faith in your work! I’m sure it’s good. And if it’s a story you wrote from the heart, I know it’s good. (I also know for a fact that you can write well, madam!) And you read all my PL junk. Of course I’d read your stuff!
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Yes, you keep telling me to have faith. You’re so sweet to this redhead, Duke. (Oh, I think you’re biased.) Now, I’ve guilted you into reading it.
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You’ve not guilted me into that at all! This professor would be honored to do it… I am sweet… *smiles bigly* But you’re way sweeter, you know.
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My mind is a mess. Thank you, Duke. *sparkles* Way sweeter, really? I’m not so sure.
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Me either now that you mention it.
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Really?
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Well, okay, you’re probably a bit sweeter. *smiles bigly*
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*sparkles*
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After reading the poem, I really do see how that sun looks like an eye. Very cool.
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Thank you for seeing the eye, Charles. Kinda cool. This sunset was a beauty. Thank you. ♡
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Once again, you sculpt a beautiful scene and mood with your words. Not only in describing the twilight, but with forming a fantasy. Beautifully done, Audrey.
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I’m a believer in fantasies coming true, Gus. We have to be… Thank you for your sweet comment.
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This is so so beautiful!! 🙂
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Thank you, Line! I appreciate you say so. This sunset was so inspiring. ♡
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You transformed words into beauty
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Sleepy, you always make me blush. Thank you…
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You’re welcome 🙂
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🙂
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Beautiful, as usual..
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Far too sweet, as usual..
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Who?
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You, Indian Cowboy. Thank you. 🙂
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Me? Naaah! Now, my face is a mottled crimson!
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Haha. You’ll recover 🙂 …good night, Rajiv.
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