Sunburst of color,
In wide open view,
Heat, she’s craving.
Ms. Lily, sweetly waiting,
For warm sun kisses.
Freckles deep inside her,
Compliment her sublimely,
Gladly, she welcomes you.
Splattering of wisps,
Accentuate her depths.
She’s a simple offering,
Smells, perfectly alluring.
Oldest Daughter & Red Headed Sister 
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Beautiful!
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Thank you, Heather 😉
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i love all your ode to flowers and how you find unique beauty in each. ❤
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How kind of you! I’ve enjoyed writing them. xxx Thanks for reading.
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Lovely poem, but I must think about the bees she attracts, you know.
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Thank you for that sweet comment, Duke. Glad you liked it. Do you think she attracts bees?
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Yes, wicked ones, I’d think. Maybe killer bees?
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Wicked ones don’t kill, then?
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Oh they can.
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They can? I fear I may be allergic. Maybe I shouldn’t find out.
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Well…you mean like honey bees? No, they won’t.
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They are far too busy, aren’t they?
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I think you’re right. But I’ve never threatened their nest, though.
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Me either!
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As with your previous poem of the ducks following each other, I very much enjoyed how you find poetry in these wondrous things.
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I very much enjoy your sweet comments. Blushing now, thank you. 😉
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Blush, blush, blush, like the petals of a flower.
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I’m a blusher…I can’t help myself. I think it comes with my shyness. I have to work overtime to keep it hidden. 😉
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Oldest Daughter & Red Headed Sister writing about herself. 😀
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Could she be?? That would mean I think very highly of myself, and sadly, I don’t. Thank you for the sweet comment.
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Trust me. She could. And she did.
Looking forward to your next poem. Very best regards,
Salva
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Too kind, thank you. *smiling*
Hope you enjoy my next poem, Salva. 🙂
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No doubt about that. 🙂
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🙂 So kind of you!
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🙂
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The freckles make it 😉
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Thank you, Sleepy. 😉 Yes, the freckles… LOL
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Zzzzz Zzzzzz Zzzzzz
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I finally did it?! Maybe over did it. You’re sleep typing. Am I that boring? 😉
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Zzzzz Zzzzzz Zzzzzz LOL
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Stop it! 😉 LOL
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🙂
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AUDREY!!!!! Wow!! Just wow!!! Perfect image you have here and your words are explicitely perfect as well. Another great one from you! Love, Amy
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Amy!!!!! You are far to kind, my friend. Thank you! 🙂
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Kindness goes a long way. Don’t ya think? (smile) xx
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Yes, all knowing friend of mine. 🙂 xx
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And I love her freckles, Aud. 🙂 Simple, I think not.
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Those freckles pull ya in, Zak. Well, she sorta is, ya know. Thanks 🙂
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In a good way, I’ll go for that. But complex the more you read into it!
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Yes, well, it helps when one pays close attention. 🙂
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Very beautiful.
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