Out there tonight
Somewhere sacred
Two lovers deeply sigh
Lost in each other’s comfort
Inspired by their passionate love
Longing to drift off in search of ours
I close my eyes and dream only of you
Out there tonight
Somewhere sacred
Two lovers deeply sigh
Lost in each other’s comfort
Inspired by their passionate love
Longing to drift off in search of ours
I close my eyes and dream only of you
These are the dreams that should always be embraced…I think everyone has such truly sacred dreams at least once in their life. A bit of torture, hope and expectations all rolled into one. Cheers Audrey.
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Yes, you summed this poem up well.
*deep sigh* These longing poems can be tough to write, as we all see how important true relationship is, Dalo. I’ve attached myself to your nickname, Randall. π
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It is always nice to read longing poems, as it is a way to see the ‘distress’ from the outside, from a different perspective, and then by doing so makes everything alright. I think that is why country music, ballads and love songs do so well. Have a good weekend, Dalo π
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What’s that say about me? I could write of longing 24/7, if I have inspiration that is. I do find a nice release from setting a poem like that free. Country music does so much, so well… Thanks, Dalo. π You, too!
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You do love being the you longing for love, Aud.
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Yes, haha. I do, Mark.
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You just keep on doing it – gifting us with these beautiful words and the sensations and images they produce. So very nice!
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Hey there, Kate. Thank you so much for being you. I’m always happy to create and happier when it moves you. π Thank you
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A longing poem. These can be the saddest, you know.
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Yes, well, I know. But I do love a longing poem.
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I know you do! That’s a good thing.
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*smiles sweetly* Shocked! A good thing…but, yeah it is.
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Everyone longs for something.
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Yes, this I know!
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Gorgeous.
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Hey Gus! π Thanks you shyly.
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π
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And I of you.
π
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Hem! If you could only see this smile of mine.. Now this is my kind of reaction. π
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π
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Audrey, I love this theme you’ve been writing about. Beautiful poem, this.
You’re going to have a book soon.
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Thanks, Shari. I’m almost there… Glad you see the simplicity in this one. I love a longing poem.
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Lovely. π
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Hey there, Richard. Thank you… π
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Welcome π
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Oooh, wow!
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Rajiv, you have the most sincere reactions. Thank you π
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Ohhh, yeahhhh.
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Glad you enjoyed this, Starr. I love a lovesick poem.
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Me too.
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π
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