You come and go
Out of this girl’s dreams
Sprinking mystery and longing
Late night shivers of the sweetest kind
Put me back to sleep, I breathe
Important dreams need me
Come quickly
You come and go
Out of this girl’s dreams
Sprinking mystery and longing
Late night shivers of the sweetest kind
Put me back to sleep, I breathe
Important dreams need me
Come quickly
One reason I like getting into bed, is the thoughts that “Important dreams need me” so your last line was great, with the mysterious and fun request of “Come quickly”.
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Then, again, I should thank you for coming by before this one was written. You make a pretty good source of inspiration, not that I’m trying to objectify you or anything. I mean you can be quite mysterious, you know, Mr. Hk.
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That is what a muse is suppose to do ~ part of that ηΌε thing π
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π Haha…yes, well lucky you.
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Dreams can be cool! I think that’s the case, at least.
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Dreams can be coolβ¦yes! Shouldn’t they be more cool than not cool. Not cool dreams are also a sad reality for many.
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Wishing a return to a certain dream. Powerful image, Aud.
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Yes, those important dreams which stem poetry, you know. I was hoping for a powerful image. Thank you, Chum.
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I like that you didn’t include a pic with this one, as your poem inspires rich imagery in all us readers’ minds… an exquisite poem.
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I was hoping to do just that, August. I’m glad you were listening. π Thank you so much! ~ Audrey
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Wow!
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Wow! I like the wow… Morning, Sunshine.
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Mornin’
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π
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This is so gorgeously written! π I love this wonderful poem! π
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Thank you, Line π You continue to humble me with your praise. π
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I love that you took understatement to heart in this piece and built all of your images around that.
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Thank you, Troy. When I don’t have a picture to help the reader out, I have to lean on imagery to tell the story.
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This is very sweet Auddie.
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As are you, Michael.
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