Deep into blue
You know me
I know you
You’re right
You’ve planted a seed
I’ve come willingly
Visions and feelings
Crystal clear images
Consuming our days
Write what I can’t say
Do what you do best
Intuition has a hold
You’re brave
You’re bold
Following your mind
Doing what your told
Show me what you know
I’ll be your flower
Sting me
Make it all go away
I feel the words
They’re on my lips
I can’t force them
I’ve tried
Feel this ache
Pressing inside
You’re in there
God knows why
Hmmmmm. Strong and passionate. I like the flower, sting me part. Very cute.
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Glad you enjoyed this one, Staci. π
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Another powerful poem. You have trapped and then release all the emotions of love and intuition of everyone out there, beautiful.
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Thank you, Randall. I was hoping to catch that rollercoaster of a ride called love for this poem. Thankful it came through for some. I was trying to bounce back after yesterday’s poem. Glad you saw this one, too. Intuition is a powerful feeling.
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(And I love the picture.)
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(Thank you, Duketh. I took it myself.)
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Much better than I could do!
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Stop itβ¦not true.
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Ooo! Who’s this about, Audith?
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Ooo, whatever you need it to be about, Duke. T’is a poem about love.
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About love and war!
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Yeah, you’re right. Can’t have one without the other, Duke.
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Very nice. π
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Thanks for reading and commenting, Austin. I enjoy having a Modern Philosopher hanging around. π
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I do what I can. π
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Wishing You Joy and Inspiration in the coming week. Thank You for All you share to brighten my days. π
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Thank you, my dear, Morgan. π
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Deeply romantic. Words can’t begin to explain that love you feel…ah but the heart can.
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I’m so glad you see this poem in the way it was intended. Thank you so much for reading.
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Wow! I really like this piece π
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I appreciate that, my friend. Thank you! π
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Bolder step, Aud. Coming up one more level from the underground parking garage of emotions, is how I envision this poem of yours, my friend.
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Yes, maybe so, Chum. This one is a bit of a mess, I’d say.
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Your mess, our treat, Aud.
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Thanks, Mark!
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The heart might know, what is rejected by mind.
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That’s usually the case, Salva. Thanks for reading!
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I liked that a lot especially the end line π
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Thank you, Sir. π
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Welcome
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