If we lived in a love song
Who would we be
I’m often left wondering
Are we only friends
Maybe star crossed lovers
Music would admit the latter
If we lived in a love song
Immortalized for others
This life wouldn’t matter
Together singing their love story
Living for them
Yet, moving together, oblivious
If we lived in a love song
Tell me, where would we go
Visions of our destination
Would our love help others
Show fate has reason and rhyme
A purpose, for living sublime
If we lived in a love song
(Now, go back and read it bottom to top. Yeah, I just tried. Kinda cool…~ Aud)
Oldest Daughter & Red Headed Sister 
This is great Audrey. And so cool being able to read it both ways. Good on you.
🙂
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Thank you, Staci. Glad you enjoyed the option. 🙂
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How strange to have two poems within one 🙂 I like reading it from the bottom upwards…makes me feel as if I am in a bit of a dream at first, and then moving forward kind of figuring things out (or at least what to question). Very well done.
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Well, I’m not sure, but it seems that from bottom to top it reads like a poem. Cool. Glad you saw the beauty of the opposite direction. Thank you.
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Very cool, read bottom to top.
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Ahh, good. I found that interesting. Thanks.
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Hm! So neat. I read it frontwards and backwards! It takes on slightly different meanings. Which way do you like it better, Audith?
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I like it the first way, since its true meaning is there…
What I found was facinating. When I was proofreading it from bottom to top (which I often do to make sure I’m concentrating on spelling and the sort) I found that it made perfect sense, as well. Not meaning to do it…just a happy little surprise. What do you make of it? Which way do you prefer it?
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I like it the original way better, too. But I think it’s really awesome that it can read both ways. Maybe you’ve invented a new type of poem! You should give it a name, you know.
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I like that we like the same version. Yeah, it is interesting… I’m not sure. Have I, Duke. You would know more than I. What would we call it?
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Oh dear. I’m so bad with coming up with names and logos. But you should definitely do this. I know this sort of poem will be hard to write, but you own it! Just think everyone around the blogosphere could be writing your style!
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Logo? Now I have to make a logo? I surely cannot do that…no idea how to make those. I shall think on a name. No thoughts, truly? Hmm…
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Ooo, I’m so bad with poetry… Let’s see… Uhh. Well, maybe a name that implies it can be read forward and backwards? (None of that Japanese stuff, you see.)
Logos? They’re not that hard!
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IDK…Transpose Verse or my favorite, The Audith.
Oh, yes, they probably are, Duke.
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They’re both excellent. The first gives more detail about what it is. You should be proud! You’ve invented a new poem format. I think that’s so cool.
I do it all the time!
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Thanks for the feedback, Duke. You just said a bunch of dadblame things here…I can’t focus.
Good for you!
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I just get really excited about such things!
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I like that you do. I should decide on a name.
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Well, think on it some, and I’ll help if you need it.
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I’m thinking… You will? Thank you, Duke!
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Yes! Let me know.
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…okay… I need to work on it.
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This is a marvelous thought to ponder…what song would I engender? And this is an awesome form! you are brilliant 🙂
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Thank you!! I’ve been living in love songs recently. Has me thinking. Please let me know if you think of one, Morgan.
Glad you liked it! Haha. Oh my…thank you. 🙂
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Thats really a hard question for me, especially since I over think everything. Oh Heck, Ill just go with Supercalafragalisticexpialidocious LOL
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and which love song would you live in? I like a lot of the thoughts you put forth in this poem, read either way. The compulsive editor part of me begs pardon, but did you mean “latter” rather than “later”? An obscure song I really like, not as bad as Bull in HEaven LOL, is You are not alone by The Eagles. Check it out if you have not heard it before. It is on the last CD they did I think, Long Road out of Eden.
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Good morning, Michael. I’m not sure I could choose just one. I’m a sucker for a love song. I have a few favorites, however. One being, Journey’s When A Man Loves A Woman, which is old school, and John Legend’s You and I is a current song of interest. My all time favs are in my heart. (Fixed it! Thank you…ugh.)
That song is attached to our friendship now, you know. LOL I will have a listen to your suggestion. … A great band!
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