Destiny arrives quietly
When our hopeful eyes
Focus elsewhere
A glorious moment
When you finally realize
He’s been calling
Watch closely
He rides in
On rainbow air
Watch closely. That’s the line I was focusing on, Audrey. My interpretation this time around. Something slipping in while you were looking the other way.
Yes, okay, I’m following you now. An interesting line to focus on, Mark. Such a protector…something slipping in while looking the other way is usually how it goes, right?
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Ooo, that’s exciting. I love this one. And it’s true.
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Haha! Thank you, Duketh. Explain! You mean destiny coming when you least expect it? Or riding rainbow air? Maybe both?
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Something else actually! About him coming, you see.
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Oh yes, I’m following you now.
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Love Rainbow air. Would like to ride it someday.
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Thank you! Me too, John. Do you think we’d be able to stop ourselves at the bottom?
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Can’t say why, but this somehow reminds me of Woody Guthrie. π
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So this seems folk like to you? I love that! Just don’t quote John Denver please… π Thank you!
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Who is John Denver, please?
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Oh, just an American folk singer from years back. He isn’t one of my favorites, but has a few great classics.
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OK, thank you.
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Ha, great poem and that is the beauty of destiny, you never know when it arrives so it is always a surprise. Great final line!
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π Truly brings on a whole new meaning now. Definitely a surprise. Ha!
Thank you for reading my poetry, Randall.
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Enjoy it immensely Audrey ~ keep it coming π
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Thank you, dear philosopher photographer extraordinaire. π
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Careful for what lies at the end of that rainbow, Audrey.
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Could be a leprechaun, Mark. π You don’t like my poem?
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I do like your poem, Audrey. Very much.
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I just need to be careful, huh?
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Watch closely. That’s the line I was focusing on, Audrey. My interpretation this time around. Something slipping in while you were looking the other way.
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Yes, okay, I’m following you now. An interesting line to focus on, Mark. Such a protector…something slipping in while looking the other way is usually how it goes, right?
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Yes, I shall relinquish this particular angle, for now, at least. I reserve the right to return to protector …
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T’is only a poem. Yes, I would have it no other way. Thank you, my dear.
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You are welcome, poet.
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π
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The thought that ‘he rides in on rainbow air’ is so beautiful.
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Thank you, Kate!! I came up with that line first… awww!! π
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Oooh, yes, that’s nice!
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Thank you, Starr! π
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