You
My light
My lambent love
Wash over me
I’m your devotee
Glowing
Blushing
Already craving
Each morning I pray
Help me rise for you
Please, allow me
Cover me in your glow
Torch me
Waiting
You
My light
My lambent love
Wash over me
I’m your devotee
Glowing
Blushing
Already craving
Each morning I pray
Help me rise for you
Please, allow me
Cover me in your glow
Torch me
Waiting
Oldest Daughter & Red Headed Sister 
Dare I say this is illuminating. 😉 xx
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You are welcome to…lol. xxxxx
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Your poem is blazing, Audrey, and I must go look up lambent after writing this comment.
Getting here late, I read down the other commenters. I feel a little voyeuristic on this one. Odd and interesting. Now. Lambent. On I go.
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Thank you!! I wanted it to be blazing, but wowzas. I didn’t expect some of the emotion it brought out.
Giggle! You and me both…lol. Tell me what you think of lambent…it’s a fine word. I like it. Lots.
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I was surprised and delighted to discover that it meant exactly what I thought it did, a derivative of ambient, a light-giving source, as it were. But a much sleeker, smoother, poem-worthy word. Great first exposure to me for lambent. I like it! Your poetry, Audrey, brings out the primal in your commenters, slyly and sometimes not so. It is an interesting phenomena, and one of which you should be proud.
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Yes, isn’t it great! You also write of it well…I like sleek words. I am humbled by their love and support. The call of the wild here today. I guess summer is here. I should be proud then? I was blushing a lot earlier when replying.
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Yes, you should be proud to be the straw that mixes the strawberry daiquiri, Audrey.
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I’m a straw? Can I be a red one? I’m officially on summer vacation. Currently looking for my own straw.
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You can be a red straw, in search of a cool, refreshing drink. Happy summer vacation, Audrey!
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Yay! I will begin a search soon. Gotta close up shop the next couple days then I can have a drink.
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!!!!
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🙂
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Beautiful Audrey. Ohhhh, I’m waiting to be torched too. Feeling tired doesn’t help.
🙂
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I hope it happens soon, Staci. Take a nap. I know it’s been a busy season… 🙂
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Lovely words.
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Thank you, Susan. I appreciate you saying so.
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You are so welcome. I enjoy looking and listening.
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I’m happy to have you, Susan. *smiles*
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Very nice indeed.
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Thank you, Starr.
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Serenity at the start of the day. 🙂
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Yes, exactly! A beautiful way to start the day, Salva.
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Nothing to discuss here. 🙂
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Well…not nothing, exactly. 🙂
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😀
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Loved this lots, Audith. This is all we should wish for in life.
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I’m glad you loved this, Duketh. Yes, I agree. Don’t you think the cloud looks like a torch?
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It does, yes. And I think someone is holding it!
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Who is holding it?
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I’m not sure… Who would you say?
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Probably me
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That is true in so many ways.
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I know.
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O-O-O-O-O A HUGE penis in the sky? Lucky you! And just WHERE are your thoughts today? Hehehehehehehehe xx
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Well….I guess it does. LOL Umm, check yourself, Amy. I think you enjoyed my poem. *winks* xxx
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*laughing out loud* Um, ya think? I saw a thumbs up in clouds but those clouds don’t show me penises. Darn! What am I doing wrong here? Sure did like that poem, Audrey. And the cloud. Tee hee. xx
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Thank you, Amy *shaking her head at you* Goofball 🙂 xx
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Thank you! Love it! Tee hee
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🙂
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That’s perfect. Beautiful 🙂
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Aww…! Thank you, Richard. Perfect…?
((Sigh))
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I thought so.
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Smiling…thank you.
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Muy caliente’ Sabrosa!
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You made me laugh and then sigh…thank you, Michael!
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De Nada 🙂
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You are making it hard not to respond, Michael. 🙂 I will blush speaking spanish for you.
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Reblogged this on Journey Of A Nifty Day Trader.
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Thank you so much for thinking so highly of my poem this morning. I blush.
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Hi,
Well, thank yourself, first for writing such a wonderful poem in such a manner, even a dick head like can understand the inner meaning of it.
Perhaps, you may have to read your “Who Am I”, again. 🙂
It’s really beautiful, Dawn. 🙂
Nice day.
Regards
Babu, Suresh
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Hi…
That may be the best compliment that I’ve ever recieved. I tend to like dick heads. You make things a challenge. I want you to love poetry, too.
You think my about me page needs revision? I do too, actually.
Thank you so much for your kind words. Truly. Have a wonderful day.
~Audrey Dawn
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Hi,
# You think my about me page needs revision? I do too, actually.
NO there is no need for any revision. What I meant was, there is an answer already written by you, for you need have no doubt about your ability to convey your message, not only to you but to others as well.
There is a vast difference between getting inspired and getting excited; I look for something that inspires me. It was there in your poem. I liked it.
🙂
Pleasant day.
Regards
Babu, Suresh
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I misunderstood you, my friend. You have a way of complimenting my work that brings me such happiness. Wow!! Just darling…
I hope to continue to inspire, then. Thank you so much.
Hugs,
Audrey
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You are welcome. 🙂
Regards
Babu, Suresh
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Oh, this is so incredibly beautiful!! 🙂 Thank you so much for the inspiration! 🙂
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You are so welcome, Line. I’m thrilled you enjoyed this one. Yay! You are an inspiration. ..
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