You have me spinning again
I think you prefer me that way
Left reflecting
Over how my need continues
To grow, wild
Learning promotes the dance
This, I know
I store pieces away
Parts of you
Constructing an image
You’ll never live up to, tis true
I’m prepared
For disappointment
Yet, I’ve decided,
I like you
My Sun
The brightest star
Welcome
Surround me
Consume me with you glow
Beat down and invade
I feel your rays
Keeping me warm
I could get used to spinning around you
It comes quite naturally, too
I think you’ll agree
Us, me, you, we
Living a fantastic dream
Rotating within your forces
Consumes me
Gathers speed
Controls my thoughts
Daily
Oldest Daughter & Red Headed Sister 
The feeling of this is poem is of both like being on a merry-go-round and then running alone under the afternoon sun. Both refreshing, but with two different types of excitement: one is controlled (running) and the other you feel you could go flying off at anytime 🙂 Nice.
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Yeah, you’ve got me all figured out. That didn’t take you long. Haha! I love how you explained my poem.
This is why I need you around. I need someone to interpret my words. Make them sound intelligent, as I usually muddle my words up, unless I can put them to a poem. Your words flow. Mine sputter like 1950 Chevy left in the barn.
Thank you, Photographer Philosopher Extraordinaire. Yep, still a bit long.
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Ha, ha…my explanation of things usually only draws blank stares. Your poetry has a way of making great thoughts purrrrr like a mint condition ’50 Chevy 🙂
And I do like my new moniker.
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Not from me they don’t! Aww, now I wasn’t fishing for a compliment. I was serious, Randall. Sweet nonetheless. ..
Good let’s keep it then, shall we? Sets you apart from the rest. 🙂
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Oh that Sun! No wonder the ancients made a god of it.
Leslie
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Well, it is something, I must admit.
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I love the sun. Just give me one day without it and you’ll see how it affects my humor and attitudes. Just ask the hubby. The sun is my best friend. The lovely seratonin levels that it elevates. Aaaaahhhhhh.
🙂
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Aaahhhh!! 🙂
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*laughing* “You’ll never live up to, tis true” that’s my favorite part, Audith!
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*laughing* My picture of the sun doesn’t look anything like yours today, Duke. (LOL…seriously, freaks me out a bit)
I figured, you might like that part, Duketh.
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I drew that work of art, dadblameit! (Who was this about?)
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Well don’t quit your day job, Duke. *laughs*
(You don’t know? Remember? I give up.)
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I shan’t! How mean…
(Oh no. I do know. I’m just…making sure.)
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Well, I’m sorry, but we both know that isn’t your best artistic work coming through, now is it? Music is more your thing, for sure.
(I had a feeling.)
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Oh no. I’m good at Punchyness. That’s an art of sorts.
( *smiles bigly big* )
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Yes, very true. How’d I miss that one…
(Must be code for something)
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We both know it’s useless. I’m good at hunting snakes.
(For what?)
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No, it has worked on me, you know. Snakes…is there a snake?
(no idea)
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Are you Punchyish now, Audith? There are from time to time.
(It could be…)
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Why do you always ask me that? Punchyish just sort of happens, doesn’t it? Now, Duke?
(Could be…tell me)
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You’re right on! I don’t know. You wanted me to ask! Not right now, no.
(Well, it means I knew!)
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See how well I do? Do I need to watch for snakes?
(I knew that you knew, you know.)
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Snakes can be friendly. But always watch!
(Humph noodles!)
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Now, you really have me wondering…
(smiling)
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Such a beautiful and uplifting poem.
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Thank you 🙂
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Learning engagement …
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Yes, I’m in a constant learning mode, I think.
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😀
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Love this, Audrey. I felt the momentum of the spin. How cool is that? Awesome job!!! xx Amy
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Very cool! Thank you, Amy. xx
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You are welcome, Audrey. (((HUGS)))
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I love the momentum of this poem. I often get lost in the emotions of Love like this. SO wonderful!!
Have a Blessed Day!
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Thank you, Morgan!! For me, writing of love is easier than living love. Love is an amazing feeling. You make me blush. Thank you.
Thanks for the smile, Girl.
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I think I agree. Being a romantic at heart, I tend to go a bit overboard with Love, so it is somewhat easier loving from a safe distance LOL 🙂
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LOL Yes! 🙂
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Yes, Audrey, thoughts revolve around the magnetic pull of a warm center, the sun, the other, the season, the other. Great stuff. Happy Tuesday.
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How sweetly scientific of you this morning, Mark. Thank you! Happy Tuesday to you, as well.
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I thought you might concentrate more on the other since I mentioned it twice. 🙂
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See how I surprise you, Mark. 🙂
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Daily, Audrey.
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Blushing again, Mark. Thank you.
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