This poem was written awhile ago. Today I set it free:
I tried desperately
Visioning
You without me
Me without you
An unhappy ending
My one true act
Just to please you
It isn’t possible
Can’t you see
Screw all this suffering
My thoughts erratic
My pulse quickened
This heartbeat
Pounding
One touch
Exploding
Do you feel me
Man, I feel you
How can it be
Fate never failing
Always
Surprising me
If only I could show you
Come
Give me everything
Oldest Daughter & Red Headed Sister 
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You know, Audith, I like that you write some of them, and then think about them. This was a good one. And it is free! It’s a great feel that it gives.
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I have to think on some of them, because they are too personal, but also feel as if someone else needs to hear them, if that makes sense.
Thank you so much, Duke. Yeah, it is a nice feel.
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It does make complete sense to me.
Sure is!
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It usually does, Duke.
What are you listening to today? Something mellow, maybe?
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Actually I’m listening to Journey…..
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No you’re not!! Truthfully, Duketh?
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Yes, I am. Do you hate them?
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I’m going to pretend that you and I haven’t discussed them, Duke. I listen to them a little. They have a few good love songs. They have one song, in particular, that makes me sad and happy, if that makes sense. Happy because a man loved a woman enough to write that song about her (Ihope) and sad because it wasn’t for me. When You Love A Woman, is one of my favorites, my favorite song is Rough Boy, but I’ve told you that before.
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Oh, I remember about talking about them. It’s just that they mean something differently to me now…
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They do….
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Yes!
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Duke… pass the pillow. You’ve had it too long now!
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*hands the pillow*
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Thank you *begins hitting herself with it*
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*grabs it from you and destroys it with his katana* You must have seen a worm in it.
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That was the yellow one… (We’re quite volatile, you know. Makes me wonder…) I think maybe I was letting out some frustration.
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Have I frustrated you?
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You…make me smile.
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*smiles bigly big*
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Our little conversation is quite fitting for this poem. Thank you for that, Duketh. Isn’t that something.
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It is!
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🙂
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Almost missed this one today, Audrey. Glad I went back. There is a different tone to this one. It’s more, forceful in one way, and hopeful in another. Interesting line: Screw all this suffering. Indeed, my friend!
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Thanks, Mark. I really appreciate how you think about my poems. Yes, those are the exact emotions that went through me.
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Always, everything… doesn’t seem like too much to ask for. 🙂
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I know…I seem a bit pushy, don’t I? 🙂
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Communion … forever. As long as it takes to build upon the same base.
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So that means a lot of the same, right? Keep pushing forward and waiting. I can handle that. Thank you for your message, Sir.
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De rien.
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Very passionate verse. Debatable whether he is good for you.
Leslie
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Thank you, I think. Yes, well, I know that to be very true, as well. Thanks, Leslie.
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Said with intensity, very good 🙂
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I was commanding my stage, Richard. 🙂 I don’t see any tomatoes, so that’s good, right? Thank you, Sir.
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Welcome
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Always love the power of your poems. Looks like you’ve had that literary oomph for a while if this is an old one.
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Thank you, Charles. I love that I can count on your words of encouragement. Well, is a month and a half ago considered old? 🙂 Sometimes, it’s hard to let go of these poems. However, I have had the oomph for a long time.
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A lot can happen in a month and a half. Heck, a lot can happen in a week.
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You’ve got that right, Charles. Hope you’re feeling a bit better…
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Eh, still tired. Figure I’ll either get a break or fall into a deep sleep for a few days.
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I understand. A deep sleep is fine, but don’t be gone long.
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I’ll try my best. No promises. Send pizza.
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I’ll live with that, I suppose. Lots of pizza. What’s your favorite, by the way?
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I’m good with cheese. Once I go into toppings, I get suggestions and lose people.
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Haha! I understand. Best to go simple.
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OH so beautiful! I love going back to old poems and discovering something new 😉
~Blessings of Inspiration~This Day~Every Day~
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Thank you, Morgan. I didn’t have to go but a month and a half back, but trust me its felt like an eternity! 🙂
Thank you and blessings to you, as well!!
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My cry to fate…
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