Slow down dear heart
You have but one body
A single mind for consuming
What’s my rush
I can’t learn it all
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Hearts beat rapidly
Bodies urge
A mind craving details
I want, I need, I believe
Striving towards excellence
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Heart quickening
Hands shaking
Mind alive, perceiving
Are these three deceiving me
I may know nothing
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Heart slows
Hands rest
Mind goes back to dreaming
Stopping myself
My own worst enemy
I, too, am my own worst enemy and my harshest critic.
Great poem, Audrey π
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Thank you, Heather. Looking forward to your post tomorrow.
π xxx
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I have come face to face with the enemy. He is me. The nice thing about getting older is the recognition of one’s own capability to push too hard. To relax with oneself is divine. Nicely done.
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Thank you for the lesson, John. I trust your words. I know this to be true of myself. Relaxing, I am. Thank you.
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Thanks Yoda
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I thought I sounded like him, too. I erased some of it…lol
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Sooooooooo in tune with you. Especially the first two verses
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Ahhhh. So glad to have such good company. I feel like I can breathe a bit.
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Reminds me of my song “Getting Nowhere Fast” from the album Osaka Time.
Leslie
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Oh my, this is one heck of an album, huh?
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There are three of them so far. “Getting Nowhere Fast” is in Osaka Time. The new album is called “Manaus Where Two Rivers Meet”. It is sounding good to me. Almost ready.
Leslie
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That’s awesome, Leslie!
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I relate to “myself, my own worst enemy”.
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I’m in good company then, I’d say. Thanks, Girl. π
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Ying and Yang at work.
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I believe you. I truly do. Thank you.
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π
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I like it, but I’m left wanting more info, Audith!
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I know you are, Duketh. Tis because you know so much about me already. You’re wanting to go deeper, I think. I like that.
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Exactly right, dadblameit!
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*claps her hands* Loves it when she’s right.
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How true these words are!!! Great poem!! Thanks! xx Amy
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Oh my, thank you, Amy. So very much!! xx
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You are welcome, Audrey! My pleasure!!! (((HUGS))) Amy
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Thank you π
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You are so cute. Every time I see your gravatar I smile. xx
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Aww, I’m better looking upside down. Thank you, Amy. I love hearing I can make you smile. xx
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I’ve heard hearts and minds bundled so accurately, Audrey, but adding hands to make it a trinity? Excellent.
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Thank you, Mark. The hands reveal everything, I think. I’m glad you understand.
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Very intense, Audrey
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Yes, it is, Richard.
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Sounds like your describing when people meet me…’ hearts beat rapidly”…lol I’m just kidding π
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So this means things are going well in MN…? LOL
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A’int it the truth? Perfect!
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Thank you, Michael. Ugh!! The ups and downs of it all.
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