Another shot at a writing prompt from Mr. Don Charisma – Disapproval . Hope you enjoy! I am a bit nervous posting this one, but in true form…off the cuff it is. This will be my last poetry post until Monday. Enjoy your weekend! ~ Audrey
I see how you look me,
Disappointed in my choices,
Sad for my soul.
Dismissive of my presence,
Within these four walls.
Hoping to stir inside of me,
Brutal melancholy.
Desires inside of you,
Need for me to change,
My thinking, my ways.
You eye my golden cross,
Which rests upon my breast,
A true devotion for His cause.
I will battle your urges,
Which I sense,
To rip this symbol from my chest.
I am His,
He is mine,
We work together, He is Devine.
You must take yourself away now,
His power will defeat your goals.
The intensity of you watching me,
Well, it seems rather bold.
Eye for an eye, if truth be told,
His proverbs from times of old.
Mustn’t strive to make those crumble,
Christians alive and well will meet,
Swords of Glory, til you stumble.
Back to where you came from Devil
Oldest Daughter & Red Headed Sister 
I know, I know… too many comments from this guy…
I have to… can’t help myself…
Never disappointed in your choices, because they are you…
Can’t dismiss your presence because my light becomes a beacon when you are near…
Don’t want you to change… not your thinking.. not your ways…
Never mess with perfection…
Your golden cross is beautiful right where it is… near your heart
Okay… I’m through now…
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Some times we have to kick ourselves and remember not to let others define who we are.
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Yes, Carl. We do, and I don’t mind doing that either.
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Really Awesome Audrey. I totally understand. I did a post once, a poem, as a dear john letter to the devil. If you’d like to read it you can do so here: http://stacilys.wordpress.com/2014/02/03/dear-john-letter/
🙂
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I really enjoyed that poem. A cute title too. 😀
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Hahahaha. Yea, gotta show that horrible little devil who’s got the upper hand.
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Exactly! 🙂
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Superb!
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Thank you!!
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Marvelous piece!!!
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Thank you so much, Elaine. Happy to have you stop by.
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Excellent poem and such a great play with how disapproval can be a great thing… Love this creativity, such absolute talent with these words to take the dismal feeling of disapproval into something so incredibly positive. A nice way to start the weekend.
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You know…you make me smile, Randall. I can’t tell you how much I enjoy hearing from you. Your description of my poetry makes me sound like a poet. Thank you for that… Your coming back to say hi makes me strive to work harder. Thank you for that, truly. Hope you took some fantastic photos today, even if it was your day off. Can’t wait to see what you’ve been up to… Good night, Photographer 🙂
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A poem for Easter weekend, indeed, Audrey. Good Friday, super Saturday, Happy Easter Sunday. I am ready to cook my traditional Polish dinner on Sunday. May your weekend be full of great things, too.
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Thank you, Mark. The Polish dinner sounds amazing!! Yum! Happy Easter to you, as well.
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Amen, and Happy Easter!
Leslie
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Happy Easter!!
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Amen, Amen!
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Thank you!
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The answer comes on the last word. I loved this.
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Oh, thank you so much, Duke. I’m glad you saw this today. Happy Easter! Your right about the answer, you know.
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Happy Easter, Audith! I know. It was a good one. I like when you answer it like that.
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You must explain more…
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In what way?
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You said you like when I answer that way..like what way, Duketh?
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Oh, I like when the answer comes at the last possible moment. And then, the answer was thrilling.
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*smiles for your answer*
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Great writing, thank you for sharing!
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Thank you very much!
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you left us with a gift … now enjoy your weekend and hurry back ya’ll hear … or is that here?
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Hi, Michael. Thank you for being so sweet. I think you’re right…its hear… I’ll be back soon.. 🙂 Promise!
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Wow! You are so talented ! This was beautiful 🙂
Have a happy weekend 🙂
Love, Wink n Pout
Blog , App
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Oh my, thank you so much!!! Happy Easter!! ~ Audrey
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You continue to amaze…..this verse is stirring…
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Thank you so much for seeing this one. Have a great Easter! Miss you very much! Love you!
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No need for nerves it was marvellous 🙂
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Well, I’ve realized that if I’ve caught your attention, then I’m doing okay, Richard. Thank you handing over “marvellous”. I’ve never had that word before. 🙂
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It was scrumdidliumptious
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It kind of was..you caught that? LOL
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Bet you’ve never had that one either?
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Umm, well, I haven’t had that one, you’re correct.
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I’ve run out of them now. Left me speechless.
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Pulls a dagger out of her pocket…tis no reason to live now
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Put it away!!!!!
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OH! Thank you…twas close!
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Phew!!!!! LOL
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🙂 Don’t scare me like that, Richard.
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No Miss
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Thank you..
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Great piece Audrey, whether off the cuff or not. Thank you. Have a great Holiday weekend. Peace.
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Hi, Michael. Thank you for saying that. Have a great weekend, as well. I look forward to reading what you have posted today. Peace right back to you. ~Audrey
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Bone chillingly beautiful! You write as if with a sword in hand. I bow to you.
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Well, thank you, Ms. Nicki Woo. Thrilled for your comment, my friend. I know we share a faith in Christ. Happy Easter! Hugs!
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Reblogged this on Don Charisma and commented:
Audrey, if I could write as well as you … well I’d be a very happy man ! Like it Audrey, you’ve got the idea for sure 🙂
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DC, you do write as well as I do, and you are a very happy man. I thank you again, for the prompt, my friend. I’m glad you liked it. I thought the subject was perfect for the weekend ahead. 🙂
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This is beautiful, love how you didn’t mention “devil” until the end! Nice work!
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Thank you!! I was hoping someone would enjoy that I left the devil for the end. Glad it was you. Cheers!
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Beautiful 🙂 Hoping you have a Purely Delightful and Blessed Easter~
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Thank you, Morgan. Happy Easter to you, as well.
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