Come closer, true love
Let these hands linger
Allow them the sides of your face
Stubble, smooth sliding down
Coming up, rough pleasures
Fingers slowly walking
Close your eyes, my dear
The softest of skin found on your lids
Feel this cool touch, a satisfied trace
Your eyes gather charming colors
Wonderment of thoughts inside you
Fingers journey to your temples
Rub a sliver of the pain away
Relax, these hands love you
Relieved to feel your hair so soft
Twisting smells of you float within
Between all fingers, anticipating
Desires awaken, hair pulled too tight
Lean in, surrender your lips
Soft and supple, manly enough
Just what a woman wants
Predestined connection fulfilled
First kiss or last pay no mind
It’s all she’s craved today
Nothing else truly matters
Oh, Valentine
Oldest Daughter & Red Headed Sister 
Bravo
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I would be worried she was going to poke my eyes out.
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…..there’s no poking eyes out……
Good grief! !!!!!! Move along fun hater!
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I was just looking out for his eyes. What’s wrong with that?
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Just admit that you liked my poem, Duke. Find that little piece of romance inside of you and admit it was nice. I won’t even ask you to comment on Happy Valentine’s Day, as it could put you over the edge. I know men with swords don’t like such none sense. 🙂
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Well, maybe…It was well done.
I missed that one! I was going to click on it, and there was an error. I go a-hunting.
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Brat!
A-hunting… 😆 A challenge…!
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Brat?!
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Umm hmm 😉
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Humph noodles, madam!
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Are you hungry? 🙂 How do I cook those?
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They are not trans–cookable!
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I think you need sleep. I have no idea what you just wrote.
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Well…it’s…well it’s sort of from Polar Express…it’s… Oh dear.
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Spill it……!
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Well, the professorish saying I was going to use went bad–suddenly.
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I want to hear it anyway…NOWITH! (You always do that.)
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I was saying something akin to “the tickets are not trans-perpable.”
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Okay then…
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Reblogged this on Odyssey of a Novice Writer and commented:
Oh my… just perfect for Valentine’s Day. Check this lady’s blog out… beautiful ‘word pictures.’
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My very first reblog. I’m speechless. Thank you, Kate. Happy Valentine’s Day! I’m glad you liked this one. I was hoping it would encourage women to look at their partners and swoon. 🙂
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Happy to share – the world could do with a little more swooning after one’s partner, don’t you think? 🙂
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I think so!
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Beautiful… wish I could write such lovely word pictures.
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I bet you can. You’re just keeping them to yourself. Thank you.
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Good memories. Me, I got a donut. Surprise–the store was packed! Nothing says I Love You like a donut–hmmm…
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Yummmm 🙂
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Short and sweet; happy valentines day…. hope your guy gets you that bottle of tequila for later
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Thank you! 🙂 Umm, I don’t see that happening. I can get it for myself.
Happy Valentine’s Day!!
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